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message 1: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Show off your writing here! Like here's my writing:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

Please comment and give constructive critisism!


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) *clicks shiny link*


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...

book covers: just ask me, and I'll make one for you <3


message 4: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Nice stories. Could you make one for The Light is Failing?


message 5: by Iviana (The Sign Painter) (last edited Jul 25, 2010 11:18AM) (new)

Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Yes. :D book covers are fun for me XP


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Oh, and Jack died.

^I love how I said that... -_-


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Is The Light is Failing a novel, or short story, or what?


message 8: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Iviana (The Sign Painter!) wrote: "Is The Light is Failing a novel, or short story, or what?"

I don't know yet.... What do you think it should be?

Iviana (The Sign Painter!) wrote: "Oh, and Jack died.

^I love how I said that... -_-"


What!? Jack... died? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Well, it seems that it would it become a novel...

It says, "If we run this light/ Take a little life..."


message 10: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Really? You think it has that chance?

Oh.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Well, I think if you keep writing, it's going to surpass the 'short story' limit...


message 12: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
What a short story limit?

And what's Ivypaw's fur color?


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Short stories are around three to five pages in Word. (The requirement you have in school) Novels are loads of chapters.


message 14: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Ah. So... 22 chapters is a novel, right? On 5 x 7 paper with 8 pages of that. (We don't have Word, plus we have it notebooks, not computers.)

Ivypaw's fur color....


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Yep. 22 chaps is a novel.

Ivypaw = brown tabby with blue eyes


message 16: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (last edited Jul 25, 2010 11:45AM) (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Okay.

Thanks. Any special markings I should know about?
How many apprentices do we have in ThunderClan?


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) ^^

no special markings...and I'll go look.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) 15 apprentices.


message 19: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Wow. That's a lot. And I'll need those fur and eye colors...... *sigh*


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Aw.... I'll go delete the spam in the topic.


message 21: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Okay. I'll look up their fur and eye colors, plus I have to draw about 4 more cats...


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) geez....I'm artistcally challenged...lol. I should upload my projects from the year.


message 23: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
You should. I'm going to get the colors and then draw four more cats....


message 24: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Say, has any of the apprentice been promoted to a warrior?


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Well, there was Snakepaw. Snakepaw -> Snaketail.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) and I shall get my camera and take pics of my fail artwork.


message 27: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Okay.


message 28: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Say, do you know Arrowpaw's fur color?


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) I will go look.


message 30: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Okay. Tell me when you've found it!


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) when Eliza did her image, she forgot to put "img src=" so the pic didn't show up.


message 32: by Iviana (The Sign Painter) (last edited Jul 25, 2010 05:48PM) (new)

Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Sam, your book covers:







message 33: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Wow! I love the third one! They're all amazing!


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) You really like the third one? I liked the second one, mainly because that's the second time I've used photoshop to make a project.


message 35: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
They're all... wow! See, we don't have photoshop or even Word... We should, but we don't.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) aw I'm sorry. >.<


message 37: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Yeah. So all I have is WordPad.... That makes it very hard to write a book...


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Well, we're here for you. =)


message 39: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Thanks. I plan to talk my dad into getting the student packet for Windows this week. Then I can finally find out how many pages it all is!


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) That's great! Have fun with that XD


message 41: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Yep. So far I have 5 chapters typed. 4 if you don't count the prologue. So out of 22, I have 18 without prologue, 17 with it.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Oh, whe are you going to upload them?


message 43: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
The thing is, I'm not. It's a different story than The Light is Failing. And I'm not dropping it. Though the other one I might... But that's not the point. The Diamond Wars(That's the name and that's all I'm letting out) will hopefully get published.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Well, that's a smart move. Wait until your done before you upload, so you don't have people waiting.


message 45: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Yeah. But to be truthful I have no idea where The Light is Failing will go. Honestly... I'm making it up as I go along. That's why the Prologue was typed in 09 and The Mysterious Visitor in 10.


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) lol I know the feeling. The thing is, with sonfics, you tend to listen to the song a lot. You start formulating ideas for each verse, which is why I like them. It forces me to think of what's going to happen next so I can actually end a story.


message 47: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
Ah. Well unlike you, I don't have anything to go by except, and you'll excuse my geeky moment, right?, The Dictates of Peotics by Tihain a Vulcan author. And I don't even know where to find the book!


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Oh I'm sorry to hear that. You can always check amazon or something...


message 49: by Sam, The Cookie Stealer (new)

Sam | 1510 comments Mod
I don't think I can. There are (according to our knowledge) no Vulcans. D:


Iviana (The Sign Painter) Mʘ‿ʘP (thesignpainter) Then where did you read the book?


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