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 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
here you can post or make a link to the stories you have written, it can be anything stories, poetry ect


message 2: by theo (new)

theo (deethedeer) I'm starting a novel soon (once i've finished the plot) so i'll post some of that up here :)


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
Cele wrote: "I'm starting a novel soon (once i've finished the plot) so i'll post some of that up here :)"

thanks :)


message 4: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

It's very slowly getting there...Not much now, and its pretty crap so I dont blame you if you odont want to read it :D


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
ok her story is not crap everybody read it!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 6: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments omg omg omg omg noooooo thats mean!!!
everyone should read Soph's :D


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
hahahaha ummmm N.O spells no


message 8: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments I think I know how to spell no lol :D


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
ok i'll take your word for it lol


message 10: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments awww ok.


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
lol I am having a problem with my story............. the poems dont make any sense


message 12: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments soo?? They don't have to make sense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
yes they do they are suppost to pradict the future but all they are doing at the moment is sound like a pig rolling in mud


message 14: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments dont be mean to your story!!


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
I cna be mean to my story cause its bad


message 16: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments noo mines bad


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
hahahaha and donkeys fly as well
yours is great Kara get that through your head


message 18: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments I cant coz its not


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
ummmmmmm it is end of discussion


message 20: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments noo its bad!


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
enough its good good good good good good good


message 22: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments no no no no no its bad bad bad badb bad


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
nope


message 24: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments bnhjfksrvdsk j.
:)


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
ndrjglseigj
hehehehe


message 26: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments lol


message 27: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments yaayyy dinner!!!
byeee


message 28: by theo (new)

theo (deethedeer) This is the beginning of a short story I wrote awhile ago for an English Essay. The rest of it needs editing so I'll post that up when I've finished.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
wow its really good :):D Keep going


message 30: by theo (new)

theo (deethedeer) Thanks :)


message 31: by Bungle (new)

Bungle Midnight Reads (bunglemidnightreads) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

This is a link for my friends writing! I wish I had time to write! If I do manage to i'll be sure to post it!


message 32: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments Okay heres the link to all my writing...Ive tried to write some poetry, aswell. Although it is kinda lame hahaha. Oh well, I tried :0

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...


message 33: by Trenice (last edited Oct 02, 2010 04:26PM) (new)

Trenice I'm a new author. My first self-published "Who Would Have Thought? Who Would Have Thought? (Men of Adonis, #1) by Trenice Carter Men of Adonis series.

You can find a sample of my writing at this link: http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/3...

***WARNING*** - Graphic language and situations


message 34: by Trenice (new)

Trenice This is a link to a tamer version of my writings: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 35: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments okay. I have added some more to the poem "forever"
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 36: by Rebecca Jane (new)

Rebecca Jane (bec3sjhdbzljldsgwsm) | 846 comments I know i've mentioned my story in "what are you reading now" but since this is actually to show your stories i may as well put it here as well
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 37: by Trenice (new)

Trenice ANOTHER GREAT REVIEW FOR "Who Would Have Thought?"
Joyfully Reviewed
October 13, 2010

Dr. Steve Kruz has finally made it though medical school with a lot of help from his best friends and brothers of the heart, Justin Brooks and Alexander Moran. To celebrate his graduation, they are headed to Vegas to let loose. On his last night there, Steve meets and is rocked by a woman who disappears after a night he will never forget.

Allison Smidte has been a loyal wife and mother even when her husband had affairs, except for one unforgettable night with a stranger. Allison never mentioned that night to anyone, not even her best friend. After finding her husband in yet another affair, Allison is now a single mother, and a nurse, just trying for a good future for herself and her son.

Things seem to be getting better when Allison meets Steve and the attraction is there pretty quickly. Imagine their shock when they realized that they came together that night years ago. Just when Allison is beginning to believe in happy endings again, several things seem to go wrong with her job, her son’s health and her relationship with Steve. Steve is confronted with an image of Allison that doesn’t make sense with what he knows. But that matters little when he realizes the danger following Allison and her son. Knowing he has to help her no matter what, Steve calls in his friends. Together they confront and quash the danger, while at the same time discovering a method of lies that were meant to crush and destroy Allison. When the dust settles can Steve and Allison find a way for a future together?

One night can come back to haunt you in more ways than one. Who Would Have Thought? proves this as Steve and Allison meet several years after a night neither had forgotten. A nasty divorce and a tough time surviving through medical school and setting up a practice had me believing that both Steve and Allison were due to find happiness. While their relationship was not smooth sailing, I thought they would be okay until things began to go crazy. I loved that even with hurt and doubts between them, they trusted each other enough to find the answers to everything going on around them. Plus, there is one little shocking matter that helps too, nope not going to tell you – just read the book. I also found that the relationship between the men was just as important as the relationship between Allison and Steve. Over all I thought the book was well written and had a strong and engaging plot. Who Would Have Thought? is a strong story of relationships, suspense, danger and of course love – what more could you ask for?


message 38: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments yay, my writing just reached 10,000 words :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
Kara wrote: "Here's my poetry:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

And heres a new story I started:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."


<3


message 41: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments ??


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
I was just stating that I luv your stories.


message 43: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments oh.


message 44: by Kara (new)

Kara (kara_writes) | 2669 comments I'm always in the mood for writing :)


message 45: by Rebecca Jane (new)

Rebecca Jane (bec3sjhdbzljldsgwsm) | 846 comments For those of you that remember my story Led by Shadows that I did for english, heres the prologue of the longer version I've started. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Please rate and review and tell me if you want to read more :)


 Soph - Lock&Key | 2239 comments Mod
omg I am gonna read that now cause I loved your other story!!!!


message 47: by Rebecca Jane (new)

Rebecca Jane (bec3sjhdbzljldsgwsm) | 846 comments I added more of my story :)


message 48: by Shwetika (new)

Shwetika | 1062 comments Fadhilah wrote: ",,I feel like crazy"

why so??


message 49: by Shwetika (new)

Shwetika | 1062 comments Bec-I love-JHDBZLJLDSGWSM wrote: "For those of you that remember my story Led by Shadows that I did for english, heres the prologue of the longer version I've started. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2......"

<3 your story !!!


message 50: by Rebecca Jane (new)

Rebecca Jane (bec3sjhdbzljldsgwsm) | 846 comments Thank you :)


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