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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Post your poems here! (unless they are short, link only please)

message 2: by Kayla (new)

Kayla http://warriorsfansworldwide.webs.com...
They are there as you go through the pages, and those are just for Warriors. I do others, too.

Thomas (Marimbapanda) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...

Careful, there are 28 poems, and the last 4 or 5 poems all go together.

message 4: by PyroLily ~Qui scribit bis legit~ (last edited Jul 08, 2010 11:04PM) (new)

PyroLily ~Qui scribit bis legit~ (pyrolily) | 37 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

One of them is published so I kinda took it off. But I'll put it back later.

Oh, and I didn't know where to put this so...


message 5: by Lacey (new)

Lacey | 571 comments Mod
Well, here's my poem called Brainless, just let me know what you think!

Have no mind,
No clue to who,
No road map
to follow,
or key to you.
So cheers to who,
For following through,
Goodbye to you
and all you knew.

message 6: by Dark Innocent (new)

Dark Innocent (deathridesmysoul) :) that's really cute

message 7: by Lacey (new)

Lacey | 571 comments Mod
Thanks, it was just a quick write.

PyroLily ~Qui scribit bis legit~ (pyrolily) | 37 comments Wow. That's so cool.

Thomas (Marimbapanda) That's really good. I could tell you what's a little bit off, if you like.

message 10: by Lacey (new)

Lacey | 571 comments Mod
Go ahead, I know there's something off about it but couldn't put my finger on it! LoL!

Thomas (Marimbapanda) all of the words, but map, follow, and mind rhyme, plus you finish more with you and who more than once.

PyroLily ~Qui scribit bis legit~ (pyrolily) | 37 comments I'm sure it would have work to just give us the genral link.

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