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Romance > A Forbidden Love in Heaven and Water?

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message 1: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Okay, what should the stories character's be?


message 2: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Isaac for the angel and Listelle for the mermaid


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

good.


message 4: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Awesome!!!
Now, how should they meet?


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

ooh, angel and water?
how SHOULD they meet? Hey I'm gonna be offline for a little while, gonna work on my story for a while.
bye!


message 6: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) she almost dies, and he comes to take her soul away, but she is so beautiful, that he spares her.


message 7: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Good idea, Michelle!


message 8: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) thanx.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

love it, be back in a little while.


message 10: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Then, he visits her like almost every day, and then he's stripped of his angel powers.


message 11: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) but he still has his wings, so he can't touch the water for fear of falling in. when angel wings get wet, they never get dry again, and they eventually drown.


message 12: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Okay, and then the she is no longer aloud to swim in the vast ocean, and has to find another place to stay.


message 13: by Kataury (new)

Kataury yeah!! that works!!


message 14: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) why isnt she aloud to swim? like her family disowned her b/c of spending all her time onland, that she id dishoniring the family?


message 15: by Kataury (new)

Kataury so they both rebel against the cruelty of life!


message 16: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) yes!! but where will they both go??


message 17: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments I don't know.......


message 18: by Kataury (new)

Kataury to a faraway island where he can stay on land and she can wash up on the shore!


message 19: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) lol, great.


message 20: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Yeah!


message 21: by Kataury (new)

Kataury But then the angels and mermaids see what they are doing and start to argue, bringing on a terrible fight.


message 22: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Awesome!


message 23: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) it starts a great war! and it turns into a little romeo and juliet thing, and at the end they realize that if she died in the first place, she would be an angel with him, and this wouldn't be happening.

so they both die, lost among the waves.

idk, random.


message 24: by Kataury (new)

Kataury It's brilliant let's do it!!


message 25: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) sure!!


message 27: by Kataury (new)

Kataury "D


message 28: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments :)


message 30: by Kataury (new)

Kataury ")


message 31: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments :)


message 32: by Kataury (new)

Kataury like my new pic.? It's what inspired me!


message 33: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) lol, i love it!!


message 34: by Oceanwaves (new)

Oceanwaves (oceanwavesheartsoul) | 86 comments Seriously! It's soooooo cute!


message 35: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Yep!! :D


message 36: by Angel♥ (new)

Angel♥ (angellover512) | 179 comments sooo sad......


message 37: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Well I changed it back again.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

I like your other one though. . .


message 39: by Kataury (new)

Kataury I liked it too. I'm too lazy to change it now though.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

so, where did the story go?


message 41: by Kataury (new)

Kataury I... don't... really know.... :|


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

well, it's back now!


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