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Add your work here if you want us to read it and give our opinions. :)

[siyao]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...
Here's my crap ^^

[Andy]

I dislike my writing, but i love writing.... so i wrote a 17 chapter book..... sooo i think i'll post the first chapter and see what you guys think..

Please comment..... nicely... but criticism would be nice!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

I read it andy, and....I hate it! :) Just kidding, it's great. Ok. I didn't actually click the link, I just hope it's the story I'm thinking about...

[Sam]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

There's my stuff. Can't garantee it's good, though they say it is. Sometimes I think they're just being nice.... Please rate and comment and give the truth and nothing but the truth!

[sydney]

Here's my story, sorry but I suck at writing the beginning of stories... :P

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Even though it probably sucks please leave nice critism... :D Thanks ya'll!

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

I have some poetry. It's kind of silly though. Here's the link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

I also have a short story:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

and a couple chapters of my one story...:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Tell me what you think! Okay? :P

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Sydney, I read your story and thought it was great! I want you to keep writing. You left it off in a very exciting place. I also think you should post something here when/if you add more to it, so I'll be able to check it out. :P

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Sam, I read yours too. They're both good! I really liked the one that was just he prologue. It sounded like such a good premis for a story. Post when you write more of it. I would love to see how it turns out.

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Sisi **Daughter of Hebe** luvs goth lolita!! wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...
Here's my crap ^^"

I don't think it was crap Sisi. I actually really liked it. You're poem about Goodbye...I couldn't come up with any suggestions, but I thought it was really good despite it's lack of ending. Keep writing!

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Andy. Email me the chapters from book 2 okay? I want to stay caught up. Because at Becca's birthday, I wasn't sure what we were talking about some of the time.

[Andy]

Well, i haven't got a chapter written yet.

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

You still haven't finished it? But you were on like page 19 out of 20... and halfway done the page too...

[Andy]

well i got that one, but thats on the computer, the next chapter hasn't started.

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Oh. Stop slacking! :)

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

There really is no need to say that I've written a grand total of about 7 pages since school let out. And they were for a bunch of different stories too... :(

[Andy]

Haha

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Yeah I know. I sent you a message in your inbox. You should check it.

[Andy]

otay

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Yay.

[siyao]

Thanks for the comments, guys! ^^

[Sam]

Laurena wrote: "Sam, I read yours too. They're both good! I really liked the one that was just he prologue. It sounded like such a good premis for a story. Post when you write more of it. I would love to see how i..."

Thank you!

[[deleted user]]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... randomness.


And im about to read all of y'alls. :)

[Locé]

this makes me mad :( im writting a story but i left it on the school computer and i cant write with it until september... also its on that computer so i cant show anybody. :( im reading your people's right now but: ANDY SHUT UP! STOP SAYING YOURE NOT A GOOD WRITER CUZ YOU ARE!.... sheesh.

[Andy]

Ok Winnie......... you cannot get your work in September...... its gone.

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

I just realized that I could post one link to all of my writing, instead of one for each individual one. So this has all of my writing, which includes the ones I posted about earlier, as well as some others. Enjoy :P Also, leave some constructive critisism. I need to know the truth, so I can make it better.

[Locé]

Andy wrote: "Ok Winnie......... you cannot get your work in September...... its gone."

AHHHHHHHHH!!!! nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!
nononononononono.
(sigh)
really???
that was the longest thing i ever wrote :( i know it was only like.... 20 pages buuut i cant write long things so it'll take me forever to redo :(
>8O!!!!!!!!!!

[Locé]

ok so.... unfortunately my storys gone, poof! dissapeared forever according to andy so all i have thats worth showing is an example of the kind of stuff that goes through my mind when my head is too tired to think rationally and logically.... so:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
so, im really depressed right now at my stupitity at leaving my story on the school computer so please dont say anything bad about this.... :(

[sydney]

Thanks to whoever read mine! I'm slowly adding more...

[Sam]

Yes thanks to the people who read mine! For those who only read the Prologue of The Light is Failing, the first chapter, The Mysterious Visitor has been posted up. :D

[sydney]

I have a question.

TO ALL OF YOU WHO HAVE READ ELEMENTALS by me!

Should Allie end up with Gabe or Talamar?
Honestly I haven't even chosen yet.. Because the typical chose would be her friend, but I have no idea! :D
HELP!

[siyao]

I have no idea! I like them both!

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

I read it Sam, and it's great!

Sydney, personally, I like Gabe better, but the choice is up to you.

[Sam]

Really? Thanks!

[Locé]

i know it's really bad writting but i havent edited it or anything cuz i just did chapter one like an hour ago so ya...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

[Sam]

Wow... that's great descriptive work, Winnie.

Yay! I can't believe how fast I'm writing! Chapter 2 for The Light is Failing is complete and posted!

[Locé]

really?? i didnt think mine was that good but thanks! :)

[Locé]

Your's is really good too by the way! :D

[Locé]

okay, so im done chapter two, here it is: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
and im not too sure about this one... is it too boring? repetetive? please be truthful, and comment please! i need help! my grammar and spelling part of my brain gets swept away when im writting something.. sooooooo.... point out any mistakes you find, please and thanks...

[Sam]

Winnie wrote: "Your's is really good too by the way! :D"

Thank you.

[Locé]

um, so i need help with a scene from my book...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Sam, I read it, and let me just say that it ended epic-ly. I love it!

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Winnie, I'm going to read yours now...

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

It was so good! And funny....and a little bit creepy...but mostly funny!

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Winnie wrote: "um, so i need help with a scene from my book...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."

I read it. And I commented on the story page, so check there.

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Sydney, thanks for reading Kara Morphix! I really should write more of it...

[Locé]

Laurena wrote: "Winnie wrote: "um, so i need help with a scene from my book...
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..."

I read it. And I commented on the story page, so check there."

thanks :P i'll look, but he needs an unusual name though... cuz later on she (me) is going to find out he can magic and all that bibbity bobbity boo stuff, soooooooooooo... if you have any ideas let me know...

[Laurena, Silly boy's sister :P]

Bibidi, Babidi and Buu... hehe...

[Locé]

um... i-kay, ... does it matter how you spell it i guess buuuuuuut thanks...