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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Any ideas for a story on heartbreak? I have reality? So post any ideas here. I guess...

message 2: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Hm...a girl is really quiet and conserved. She doesn't open up to boys much, because she got hurt a really long time ago, and she doesn't want it to happen again. But there's this boy that starts being really nice to her. He keeps hanging out with her and sitting with her, even when she ignores him and doesn't accept him. But slowly by slowly, she starts to fall in love with him, and open up to him, and give her heart to him...and then he breaks it?

message 3: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) that would be a good idea. it's fun to write about people who are gits, because it's funny when something bad happens!

message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow... that's a good idea. It's kind of like what happened to me but I fell for him immedietally... I like it. Great Idea.

message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Yea lol.

message 6: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) whoa that's a great idea!

message 7: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie What do you mean 'like what happened to me'?

message 8: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Thanks!! :D I was thinking of using it myself for one of my own stories...but we can write it here!!

message 9: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) i really like it!!!

message 10: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Thanks!!! :D

message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

So should we start writing it? and after he breaks her heart she misses him. i think...

message 12: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Sure!! I'll make a topic for it!

message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

ok. i loved your start! i added a part i think i was the sixth addition.

message 14: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Cool...just be careful not to switch to present tense.

message 15: by [deleted user] (new)


message 16: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Yep! :) I will try!

message 17: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) ok, wut if she has an older, by like a year, hot sister, and either this boy or the one before breaks her heart by starting to go out with her?

message 18: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Ohh! ouch!! :o

message 19: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) and he just leaves her literally scabed ant wounded on the ground and says "i just don't love you anymore,"

i don't know how the scabbed and wounded part comes in, but you get it.

message 20: by Kataury (new)

Kataury whoa! you guys know how a girls heart gets broken!

message 21: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) sure do...*sniff*

message 22: by Kataury (new)

Kataury oh... sorry. You guys must have had some pretty bad experiences. "(

message 23: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) i actually havent [thank the good Lord] but my friends have had some awful breakups.*shudder* i don't want to be included on that list. i'm too good at sympathizing.

message 24: by Kataury (new)

Kataury wow... well that's great Michelle! sympahizing for other people is a pretty unique skill and is a good one to have.

message 25: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) thanx. i do it all the time. my friends call me the healer. i think its insane, but what you seldom have for yourself, you have to give to others, otherwise, the supply will just stay there, bothering the heck out of you, waiting to be used. that's the way i see it, and its okay if it doesn't make sense. I never make sense. and i should really start...

message 26: by Kataury (new)

Kataury that's a good choice of words. And it is quite true!

message 27: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) thank you.

message 28: by Kataury (new)

Kataury So... what were we talking about?

message 29: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) bugger if i know.

message 30: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) oh, yeah, the story plot!! how i forgot about that, i don't know.

message 31: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Right the story plot... what was it again?? "o

message 32: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) i don't know. there's too many words to decipher...

message 33: by Kataury (new)

Kataury *sigh* We have quite a problem with getting off subject.

message 34: by Michelle (last edited Jun 14, 2008 11:25AM) (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) yeah...

message 35: by Kataury (new)

Kataury hm.... :_

message 36: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) I noticed that you guys keep doing that...

message 37: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Well... It's fun!! "D

message 38: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) sure is!!

message 39: by Kataury (new)

Kataury ha ha!! so uh... what were we talkin bout?

message 40: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) idk, thats the point of getting off topic!!

message 41: by Kataury (new)

Kataury ha ha!! :D

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