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message 1: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Any ideas for poems?


message 2: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) how would we do this, adding onto a poem? it could b like a greek myth poem, about some sort of hero like Heracles or Thesus.


message 3: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Yeah, like one person writes a line, and another person writes another line. Let's choose a good topic...maybe, springtime? I'll start:

Green fronds of grass, waving a light breeze


message 4: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) For the first time you find your heart at ease


message 5: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Glistening raindrops, dancing on bright leaves


message 6: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments And the stars comfort you.


message 7: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Lying down, on the pillow-like ferns


message 8: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments While the river churns


message 9: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) Drink in the sweet-scented breeze


message 10: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Stare up at the tall, shady trees


message 11: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments And watch the moon rise.


message 12: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) The hard cold part inside you dies


message 13: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments You smile, then sleep.


message 14: by Kataury (new)

Kataury And dream of a great Keep.


message 15: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin In an hours time, you awake


message 16: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) Smile a smile you can't fake


message 17: by Kataury (new)

Kataury and wait for a new day where you see the morn's rise.


message 18: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) (end of poem? It sounds like it. Bravo!)


message 19: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Ha ha! that was brilliant everyone!! congrats!! :D


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

wow, holy cow that's good! Here, let me put it all together. . .


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Green fonds of grass, waving a light breeze
For the first time you find your heart at ease
Glistening raindrops, dancing on bright leaves
And the stars comfort you
Lying down, on the pillow-like ferns
While the river churns
Drink in the sweet-scented breeze
Stare up at the tall, shady trees
And watch the moon rise
The hard cold part inside you dies
You smile, then sleep
And dream of a great Keep
In an hours time, you awake
Smile a smile you can't fake
And wait for a new day where you see the morn's rise.



message 22: by Kataury (new)

Kataury Brilliant!!


message 23: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments Want to start another one?


Mack-a-doodle & cheese  (mack-a-doodle) | 133 comments Sure Sure!


message 25: by Morgan (last edited Jun 14, 2008 09:46PM) (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments Darkness srirls


Mack-a-doodle & cheese  (mack-a-doodle) | 133 comments Light about it twirls


message 27: by Kataury (new)

Kataury But in the deep of these to ways


message 28: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments Is a secret.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Deep in the damp cave, water drips


message 30: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) It falls upon my tingling lips


message 31: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments Where I hide in both.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

The secret stings my mind


message 33: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments With the passage of time


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

(Hey I have a question, when this poem is done, can we write one for my story? Cause I am not good at poetry, and I need a poem for it. I can't think of anything.)


message 35: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) (sure)


message 36: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments ((Sure!))


message 37: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) I think only one thought


message 38: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments More important than everything


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

'I have all the time in the world'


message 40: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments ((You guys? Mind if we have the secret be something funny, like 42? Anyone read Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy?))


message 41: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) (lol good idea)


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

(hmm, i'll let you guys work that out. Poetry's a bit too complicated for my mind.)


message 43: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments My mind curls


message 44: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) Around the secret most have forgot


message 45: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments So precious


message 46: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) It's a weight that only you can carry


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

(It's long . . .)


message 48: by Morgan (last edited Jun 15, 2008 08:27PM) (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments I whisper it to me, and you.


message 49: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 203 comments Fourty-two......


message 50: by Allie (new)

Allie (pearlrose95) ((yay!))


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