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message 1: by Jackie (last edited Jun 06, 2008 01:58PM) (new)

Jackie (ibscorpioqueen) | 74 comments Mod
I thought I should have a place for you to put your things for me to read and review so here it is! BTW anyone else who wants to read and review something here feel free to do so, just TRY to be NICE when you do so. For Example: If you rip something up in a person's work also give them something you liked about it, (if possible) I am sure there was something that interested you to their story in the first place!

message 2: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/6... That's the link to mine. I have a lot, so you can choose what you want to read. Some of it's quite long.

message 3: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...

i haven't updated in a long time, cuz i can't find my flash drive. :( but there's still plenty of my writing 2 read.

btw jackie i forget; have you read any of soul stealer? just wondering...

message 4: by Jackie (last edited Jun 08, 2008 04:18PM) (new)

Jackie (ibscorpioqueen) | 74 comments Mod
Please post your reviews if you do review anything for someone in my reviews post.

message 5: by Jackie (new)

Jackie (ibscorpioqueen) | 74 comments Mod

This is my story just in case anyone wanted to check it out and review it for me.

message 6: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Actually, Jackie, your link leads to ALL stories and writing. I'll fix it:

Hey people, if you care, I posted the first chapter of Part Two of Moon Rise (a.k.a. Chapter 34). It's kind of the sequel, but it's still part of the same book. :D


message 7: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Posted two more chapters of Moon Rise (ch. 37 and 38).


message 8: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin Hey, if anyone want to read it, I started this new story called Outcast last night @ 4:00 in the morning on Tuesday (today right now)! I've been working on it since then!! (It's Tuesday right now, @ 8:26 in the morning) I'm so tired! Anyway, I would really appreciate if you checked it out and gave me feedback, since I worked on it for a long time!! The link is below. Thanks!


message 9: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) I finished a short story that you guys have probably read the beginning of before. I need to do some serious editing, I know, so I will understand if you are harsh, or find so many things that need improvement that you can't fit it in the comment and need to send me a private message. It's called Grim


message 10: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) I have set of random little thingys (there's four) and it's called Musings and Ramblings. They aren't stories, and what I wrote is pretty much me (except for the fourth one...) so I'm not likely to revise it. But I had a lot of fun writing them, and I think that you might have fun reading them too!


message 11: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ cool! i have something like that on my laptop... maybe i should post some chapters of it... hmmm

message 12: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin I just posted chapter three of Outcast! Please read and comment! :D


message 13: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin I posted chapter five of outcast!! :D


message 14: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin chapter seven of outcast! :D


please read & comment! XD

message 15: by Chet (new)

Chet Hanson | 2 comments It was so easy to fall in love with you"

It was so easy to fall in love in love with you
And when I did every dream I'd dreamt came true
You're Heaven sent, the embodiment of everything I crave
And the only one who even begun
To make me want to behave
It was so easy to fall in love with you

The early years went flying by so fast
It seemed impossible that joy like this could last
But here we are so very far down the road of life
We believed and were not deceived
As we stand here, man and wife
It was so easy to fall in love with you

What lies ahead is impossible to know
But looking back our history will show
We're ready for what's ever in store
The cord that binds is strong
When death doth overtake the remaining heart will ache
But sweet memories linger long
It's been so easy to stay in love with you

(Sung to the tune of 'I hope I don't fall in love with you' by Tom Waits)

message 16: by Richard (new)

Richard Sloan | 1 comments I self-published the novel The Sorceress of Menlo Park on Kindle. Here is a description of it:
The Sorceress of Menlo Park
By Richard Sloan
Available on Kindle

Since childhood, Joanne's scientific achievements have brought her both praise as 'The Goddess of Natural Forces' and condemnation as 'The Evil Impulse.' She calls herself 'Sorceress'; others call her 'Forbidden Grapes', 'Jezebel', 'Bad Girl', and more. Now twenty three years old, she is developing a microchip forebrain implant to cure a neuromuscular disease. Her project is the First Wave for the B.A.A.L.S. (Bay Area Alliance for Life Sciences), a Consortium of Big Money and Special Interests. If she succeeds, dozens more innovative projects will follow.
However, she is opposed by the United Front Coalition, which is frightened by the dangers, such as mind control, Frankenstein monsters, and the Beast of Revelations. The Coalition members include 'The Wrath of God' - a modern day Prophet Elijah, 'The Red Scourge' - a bioethicist who has stopped many risky projects in their tracks, the arch feminist 'Sisters of Gaia', who consider Joanne a traitor to her gender, 'The Regulator' - a U.S. Senator and possible future president, 'The Deacon' - the chief negotiator for a major labor union, 'Mr. Credibility' - a Stanford University Nobel Prize winner, 'The Loose Cannon' - a reporter embedded in the Coalition, and 'The Dealmaker' - a venture capitalist set on vengeance and power.
The Coalition members confront Joanne in a series of public debates with an intensive discussion of the issues. These include, among others: How far should scientists be allowed to go?, Are we God's children, or God's co-creators?, and How can we save our humanity?. At the same time, the Coalition resorts to stalking and smearing Joanne and interfering in her troubled marriage to 'The Prince' - the scion of one of America's wealthiest, most powerful families. But the more they attack Joanne, the stronger she gets. Can they stop her? Will the Sorceress divide and conquer them first?

Richard 'Rick' Sloan

message 17: by Chet (new)

Chet Hanson | 2 comments Jackie wrote: "I thought I should have a place for you to put your things for me to read and review so here it is! BTW anyone else who wants to read and review something here feel free to do so, just TRY to be NI..."

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