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message 601: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina nodded slowly. She was pleased that he was going to be doing something productive but she was still trying to understand the situation.



((James should end up with a pile of remotes at his feet. How many should there be? 10? 15? 20? 100?))


message 602: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
((hmmm...how about 25?))

James closed his eyes and reached for the remote. He could picture the diagram Marina had copied very clearly. He reached with magic and summoned the exact pattern of the metal that was the remote.

Zip! Ping! Zip! Ping! Zip! Ping!

James watched with wide eyes as no less than twenty-five remotes rocketed through his illusion wall, hit the real wall, and landed in his lap.

Zip! Ping! Zip! Ping! Zip...


message 603: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina shut her eyes tightly as a loud buzzing sound filled the air. When it stopped, she opened her eyes to see a pile of remotes sitting in James's lap. Wide-eyed, she picked up one and pressed the largest button, nothing happened. "What do we do now?" she mouthed, unable to form words in her shock.


message 604: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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James was shaken, too, although he didn't show it. "I'm not sure," he admitted. "Do you still have that diagram in your notebook?"


message 605: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina nodded. Of course she still had the drawing. What was she going to do... ditch her notebook? Marina immediately produced the notebook from her pocket and promptly flipped it open to the page with the drawing of the remote. She was glad she was a fast sketcher. And a pretty accurate one, too.


message 606: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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"Great," James muttered, looking the diagram over. "I didn't think Perkn would make a bunch of the same remotes, but I guess he has a lot more things to unlock then just Thomas's chair."


message 607: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina nodded halfheartedly. She was preoccupied in her thoughts... Just what else might Perkn have to do with those remotes?



((Does this mean the story's going to end soon? If James is about to save Thomas?))


message 608: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
((...maybe...but we can continue it, like with getting back home and stuff, if you want))

"Okay," James said, "so what it looks like is that this is the same basic design for each remote, but this part, here," he pointed to the transmitter on the diagram, "transmits a different wavelength for each lock. I'm not sure how that helps us, though."


message 609: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina could hardly understand what James was talking about so she responded slowly, "So... do you know how to tell which one will work for Thomas's restraints?"


message 610: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
"No."


message 611: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina set the remote she had picked up earlier aside and grabbed another one. "I guess we'll just have to unleash every prisoner in the place," she said skeptically, pushing the big central red button on this one as well. I wonder if there is a distance limit for these... Marina thought. She was, after all, uncertain about whether her plan would work or not.


message 612: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
James closed his eyes briefly. "Great." But he also grabbed up remotes and started pushing their buttons.

--

Thomas had almost settled into a light doze when, with a loud click the metal restraints on his arms and legs popped off. He looked down in surprise and then smiled and stood up, rubbing feeling back into his wrists. "Raven, wake up!"


message 613: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments When the pile of remotes had shifted, Marina blinked and stood up. "Let's go find Thomas," she said, already getting to her feet.


message 614: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments ((I'm not saying his remote was the last one, but James and Marina wouldn't be able to hear the resounding click from their position.))


message 615: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (last edited Oct 17, 2010 10:48PM) (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
Raven opened her eyes, and looked over in his direction, slightly worried. "Is everything okay? Are we under attack?! What?!"


message 616: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments ((I thought Raven was blind.))


message 617: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
(..she is...)


message 618: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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"No," Thomas said, grinning. "James must've somehow found the unlocking thing for my chair. I'm free! Let's get out of here!"

--

"Yes, lets," James agreed, getting to his feet. He suddenly felt dizzy and nearly fell over. His vision was going all gray and a buzzing noise sounded in his ears. "What..." he whispered.

((btw, he's just so exhausted that he's passing out. Nothing else.))


message 619: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
"Okay." Raven said, nodding. She stood up, and then stopped."Wait...if the chair is unlocked, does that mean we can use magic around you, now?"


message 620: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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"No," Thomas said, shutting his eyes briefly. He touched his upper arm absently and flinched at the pain. "The chip that...that cancels out magic is in my arm."


message 621: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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James collapsed against the wall and slid to the floor. "Uhh...fainting," he said breathlessly.


message 622: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
"Well, then we should go find them fast, before we leave." Raven said, taking his hand.


message 623: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
"Yeah..." Thomas said, suddenly worried. He had no idea how to find James and Marina in this labrynith of an underground building, and no way to defend himself and Raven if they came across any guards.


message 624: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

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Raven heard the worry in Thomas's voice, and asked,"Hey, why do you sound so nervous?"


message 625: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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"It's just..." Thomas started, and then explained his worries.


message 626: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
"Oh. Well don't be too worried. I can kick the guards @$$'s and you could keep me from running into random walls! And besides, we could always interrogate them." Raven said, shrugging.


message 627: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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"Sure..." Thomas said, smiling a bit. Cautiously he leaned out of the doorway of his prison to make sure that no one was in the hallways. Then he turned left and started walking, keeping ahold of Raven.


message 628: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
Raven walked beside him, keeping up with his fast pace.


message 629: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina gaped in horror as James slumped into a pile before her eyes. "Um. James?" When James did not respond, Marina reached out her arms and took hold of James's. She hoped she would be able to find Thomas. They better be nearby, thought Marina, biting her lip, I don't think I can drag James that far... Marina's thoughts trailed off as she focused on finding Raven and Thomas ((What about Shay?)).



((Can there be a trickle of water wherever Raven and Thomas are? Please?))


message 630: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
((Yeah, sure.))

I have to wake up, James thought slowly. Why did I faint, again? Could it be...because I don't have any energy? He pondered this for a moment or so, then thought, Maybe I can get energy from the rocks. ... Do rocks have energy? He thought for another minute. Am I being dragged? ...Who's dragging me?

...I need to wake up.


--

Thomas made another couple of random turns. He thought it odd that he hadn't seen any gaurds at all.


message 631: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments Marina concentrated, searching for water she could use for strength so she could continue pulling James. As her eyelids flittered with weariness, she saw some water. And by it, just a reflection, was Raven... and... Thomas. He had white-blond hair, wild blue eyes... just as James had described him. Marina wanted that water to stay there because, with it, she could navigate blindly. She closed her eyes and tightly gripped James's left hand knowing where she was going only by the image of the trickle of water leading towards Raven that shone sharply in her mind.



((Oh... I know why there aren't any guards about. They're all trying to find James and Marina in the secret chamber.))


message 632: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
Raven walked silently beside Thomas, holding his hand as they took the turns. This is....weird. I haven't heard any movement other than us.....


message 633: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments ((Notice the trickle on the ground!))


message 634: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
((She can't hear THAT well!!))


message 635: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments ((Umm... have Thomas notice it. I need you guys to follow it so Marina can find you 'cause she's following it from the other end.))



Marina continued to follow the trickle which had now appeared at her feet. It was growing smaller behind her as she used its energy to keep hold of James.


message 636: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
Thomas looked down and noticed water trickling down the hallway. "Weird..." he said. "Did a toilet overflow or something?" Immediately he pictured the evil Perkn frantically pushing a plunger into an overflowing toilet and snickered loudly.
--
I have to wake up, James thought again. Fuzzily he felt his power drifting down into the ground, deeper and deeper. Something please give me energy...


message 637: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
Raven smirked. She accidentally stepped into the stream, and then immediately pulled back. She had heard voices...Marina's voice... "That's Marina's magic right there." Raven said hurriedly.


message 638: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
((Waitasec...does Thomas know Marina?))

James sensed an immense source of warmth approaching his power. When he reached it, energy surged through him. His eyes shot open and he gasped. "I feel like my blood is boiling," he moaned to no one in particular.


message 639: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
((Yes....

Ooh, what is the energy source? Is it perhaps...Raven...? Mwahahahaha!!))


message 640: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments ((I don't think so... (to the Thomas and Marina)_))



Marina flinched. James was conscious once more. As James sat breathing heavily before her, Marina pondered this for a second... There was too much... magic. His, or hers, or Ravens, or... could it be Thomas's? But there was no wind. Maybe it was the stillness, could Thomas be causing something?



((I think it would be cool if Thomas was the source of the power. But he can't do magic right now, so...))


message 641: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
((Well, i was originally thinking of, like, molten lava, but it would be cool if Thomas was the source. And just because he can't use magic right now doesn't mean he doesn't have any...))

"Who's Marina?" Thomas asked.
--
"Marina," James said, focusing on his friend. "What happened? Where are we?"


message 642: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
"She's the older girl who's with James right now, she can control water...And that's her magic. We need to follow the stream," She said hastily.


message 643: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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Thomas looked at Raven sideways, forgetting that she couldn't see the skepticism on his face. "Are you sure it isn't a trap or something?"


message 644: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
"I'm very sure, Thomas. I heard Marina's voice, and it sounded urgent. We need to follow it, okay?" Raven said, not looking at him.


message 645: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
"Um...okay. Sure," Thomas said, studying Raven's face. "Yeah."


message 646: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
"Then let's follow the stream," raven urged.


message 647: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

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"Okay. It's going this way..." Thomas took Raven's hand again and started following the trickle of water.


message 648: by Sketchy Z, I'm putting the FUN back into FUNERAL. (new)

Sketchy Z | 1312 comments Mod
Raven walked with him, hoping they didn't lose too much time doing this. If only she could see...Then they'd be able to get there faster!


message 649: by Frankie (new)

Frankie | 546 comments "You fainted." Marina paused in her reply and looked to James solemnly. "And we're finding Thomas and Raven. They're at the other end of this baby river." Then Marina realized she was still gripping James's arm mightily. "Can you walk now?"


message 650: by Bobbie, The Supreme Overlord of CACAR (new)

Bobbie (bobbiesquares) | 1257 comments Mod
"I think so." James stood up, steadying himself against Marina. He felt a bit dizzy, but that soon passed. "Let's see...yep, I can walk."


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