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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Name: Zoe
Age: 16
Appearence:
Things you know about the character so far:
Things you know about the character's past:
Where you think the character will end up:
What you want help with: everything

Name: Brian
Age: 14
Appearence:
Things you know about the character so far:
Things you know about the character's past:
Where you think the character will end up:
What you want help with: everything

Name: Jack
Age: 15
Appearence:
Things you know about the character so far:
Things you know about the character's past:
Where you think the character will end up:
What you want help with: everything


message 2: by LaNaria (last edited Mar 08, 2010 08:10PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Zoe: short dark hair, wears cloths that are too big, loves comfort, has longest record for chewing gum. And laughs like a hienna.
those are just some ideas...


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, I like them


message 4: by Summer (new)

Summer | 349 comments Jack:
-Good old fellow cuz Jacks always are
-Kind of wants to drop out of school but he has a *ahem* secret crush on her and she keeps pushing him to keep up his grades and graduate
-wants to be a mechanic


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Brian: really skilled with the hair gel, naturally straight teeth, perhaps his father or older brother is in the air force or navy and he wants to follow the same path.


message 6: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments wow I know pwople with all three of those names...O.o
Summer, not all Jacks are good old fellows....

Jack: Can makes a mean quesadilla, is obsessed w/ cuct tape, bites his fingernails, had a buzz cut until he was 10 years old, long eyelashes, excels at science, plays guitar.

Brian: Has a pierced ear, wants a tattoo of a dragon on his arm, works at a resturant or something, has an embarressing baby picture that his friends use as blackmail, is fascinated by gelatin.

Zoe: Is a health freak, runs track, thinks that guys with motorcycles and thumbrings are attractive, hates cockroaches, dresses up as cruella DeVil when she hands out candy on Halloween, doesn't have her ears pierced.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I like those suggestions. You should use all of ours.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

sure, but I might switch wich person the suggestion is for.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

That would be fine too. Well, they're your charries so you don't have to take our suggestions.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

lol. I wrote the 1st chapter. Rough draft of course.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Of course.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

That was good. It left me hanging.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

yes! exacly!


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

There were a few spelling errors, but other than that it was really good.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

It's a rough draft


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

That's why it's okay.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Do you think I should have it only from Wren's point of view? Or her and Falcon?


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

I think only Wren's would be good, but it's your story.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

IDK


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

8DK


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

That's weird that Bailey likes Wren but she hates Falcon.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

O.o yeah, well Falcon's more of a rebel


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

That makes sense, then.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, like if you read his version, he smokes


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Indeed he does.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

so give me some feedback plesase


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, I liked it, but I don't have enough to go on for constructive criticism.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

hmmmm...Was anything unclear?


message 31: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Wowzie dozzie... your story makes me want to cry... I'd beat that woman. And the one from Falcon's pov in my opinion gives away too much.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

so, u like it?


message 33: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Yes, Wren's really interesting.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

kul, anything you didn't understand, want me to add, take away...


message 35: by LaNaria (last edited Mar 10, 2010 07:25PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Not in Wren's keep writing in her pov Falcon makes everything out of place, Wren isn't enven introduced use Wren.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

ok, I'll probally do two chapters tonight.


message 37: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments okay...I can dig that


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

IDk what to call them tho...


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Emy wrote: "hmmmm...Was anything unclear?"

Uhhm....I don't think so...
You're going to tell more about their pasts as the story goes on, right? Of course you are. That was a dumb question.


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, I changed the 2nd chapter


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

I'll go read it.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

I think i'm going to make one of them superstish(SP)


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

Superstitious.
Sounds like a good idea.


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