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message 1: by LaNaria (last edited Mar 08, 2010 03:58PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Name: Payton "something" (same story as Harper C.)
Age: 16
Appearence: built (?)
Things you know about the character so far: Owes money to everyone. Is the Captin of the basketball team, and Coaches kid. On the off season does drugs and pays for his habit with gambling money. He lives where the nice houses are, his mom's a lawyer and he's an only child.

Things you know about the character's past: (?zilche?)

Where you think the character will end up: not with the prittiest girl in school, kicked off the basketball team, and in a mess of trouble with his dad.

What you want help with: the other half of it.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

He should be kind of hot.


message 3: by LaNaria (last edited Mar 08, 2010 04:41PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments yes to the ladies, but to the other guys he's a but crack and more annoying each day.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, yeah.


message 5: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments why though?? even guys don't get jelous that easy, and Payton doesn't seem that annoyinng. drugs isn't a big enough flaw...


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Give him a really big mouth (figurative).


message 7: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments okay


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

It's a good flaw. Makes characters annoying, it does.


message 9: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Cassie wrote: "It's a good flaw. Makes characters annoying, it does."

gosh your fast...


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

*chuckles*


message 11: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments cheetah!!!


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Speedy Gonzolas I am.


message 13: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments Gahhhhhhhhhh, I wrote a comment next thing I know your comments allready there.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

*cackles*


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

haha... maybe he's constantly picking a fight with people...


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Ooh. I like that one.


message 17: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
LaNaria wrote: "Name: Payton "something" (same story as Harper C.)
Age: 16
Appearence: built (?)
Things you know about the character so far: Owes money to everyone. Is the Captin of the basketball team, and Coa..."


*gasps* Payton is a guy?!

olo- OI was guessing just by the name (when I saw the folder) that it was a girl.

prob cause my little cousin's name is Peyton (pronounced the same way)

Great name! I applaud the awesomeness.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Hahah.


message 19: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
*sheepish grin*


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

That's okay. There's some chick who wrote a book about guns and her name is Paxton.


message 21: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
Paxton..that's cool.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

It sounds kinda manly.


message 23: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
it does indeed.

In fact, I would've thought she was a guy..oops. lol


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, there's a picture of her.


message 25: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
olo


message 26: by LaNaria (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments when I hear Paxton, I'm picture a girl with abbs, which is so gross to me. And I know Payton sounds like a girl name but that makes it all the more funny and so fun to write... [snickers:] bad boys are always so interesting.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

Girls with slight muscles are good, but it freaks me out when they're all like ripped and everything.

The Paxton I'm talking about looks like the peoples on the crime shows.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

When I hear Peyton I think of The Game Plan... lol.


message 29: by Ky, The Name Ninja (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 812 comments Mod
Mandy♥ wrote: "When I hear Peyton I think of The Game Plan... lol."

*laughs* awesome!


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

I still need to see that movie...


message 31: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments it was pretty cool


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm so behind in the movie world.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Cassie wrote: "I'm so behind in the movie world."

I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing...

Hmm, for appearance? When I hear Peyton, I think tan skin, green eyes, and light brown hair that's a little messy.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Ooh, sounds hot.


message 35: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments muy spicey


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Indeed, quite spicey.


message 37: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments yes, quite.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

Woot! Cassie, I like your title.


message 39: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments -highfive-


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy wrote: "Woot! Cassie, I like your title."

Haha, thanks. Zane knocks those two out of the park.


message 41: by LaNaria (last edited Mar 24, 2010 05:25PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments LaNaria wrote: "Name: Payton "something" (same story as Harper C.)
Age: 16
Appearence: built (?)
Things you know about the character so far: Owes money to everyone. Is the Captin of the basketball team, and Coa..."


still need help, please humor me.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

Hmm...he needs some quirks...
Perhaps he runs his tongue over his teeth a lot.


message 43: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments He scratches behind his left ear when he's nervous?


message 44: by LaNaria (last edited Mar 28, 2010 12:57PM) (new)

LaNaria (laenae) | 67 comments RedPath ~Enna-girl~ wrote: "He scratches behind his left ear when he's nervous?"

who does that? (not that it matters Payton doesn't get nervious easy so it could work)


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

RedPath ~Enna-girl~ wrote: "He scratches behind his left ear when he's nervous?"

Ben does that!


message 46: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 562 comments lol!


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Hahaha.


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