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Christa (is on top of the world!) (obsesedwbooks) Feel free to critique all you like, I could really use the critisism.

Christa (is on top of the world!) (obsesedwbooks) Why must you confuse me?
Can't you see that you abuse me?
First you say love,
then it's loathe.
And it starts all over again.
Can't you see what you're doing to me,
my sweet, sweet enemy.
There's no need to apologize,
reazon,reason will make me realize the truth behind those eyes.
Icy cold like winters snow,
you'll never know
how I feel deep down inside;
though, I'm giving you some insight
things will never turn out right.
Which is why I must say good bye,
My sweet enemy.

message 3: by Emma (new)

Emma Personally, I love this!!

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