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message 1: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) this is a place u cna post any story or pome nd if u want people to comment it

message 2: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) thxs


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

not the frekin kit kats again crap

message 4: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) no but i just felt lik goin


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message 6: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) hey weeeeeeeeeee is my thing

i do it all the time on lots of other groups

message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

but your not a wee person

message 8: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) ikr? but i lik typin it, when im home im gonna post a poem here can u peoplez tell me wat u tink?

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message 10: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) i waz really really depressed nd mad when i wrote this

I'm so tired

I'm so tired...

The pain
Stop hitting me
The sorrow
Stop Playing me
The act
You're not that good of an actress

I'm so tired...
So many voices
Shut up
So many people
Leave me alone
So amny lies
Don't talk if you're gonna lie

I'm so tired...
The hate you feel to me
The pain you put me threw
The lies you told me

I'm so tired,
So I pull the tigger,
And sleep

message 11: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments that's deep i like it sound like something i would write. i love it!!

message 12: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) thxs

message 13: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments Np for the past month or so i live for poetry idk how

message 14: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) coolz, i write poems when im upset, i dont lik wirtin happy poems they always end up soudin super weird

message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Im Mii

Ima girl you can't fake mii
Im unique you cant be mii
Ima liar you can't beat mii
Im in love you cant break mii
Im strong you cant take mii
Im in trouble dont come and save mii

does this sound any good??

message 16: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) coolz, i likz it

message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

thx.... what about this one

You left mii all alone
You left mii in the darkness
You left mii with a hole in mii heart
You left mii without saying goodbye
You left mii and I forgave you when you came back
You left mii again
I have no hope
You left mii

message 18: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) likz it tooz

message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

thx... post some BRI you are a very good poem-er-ish person

message 20: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) i posted that one up there but no ones ever seen my stuff b4, so its lik weird for mi..

message 21: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments me too if i write a happy poem i'm being plain crazy cuz lets face it life is not all pretty and straight and happy that what i love about poetry b/c you bring out the ugly side too!!

message 22: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) exactly!! then when some happy person cs it there all lik thats so depressing write somting happier

message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

oh it was good.... bri... so how do you go from depressed to happy in 1 hour??

message 24: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments finally!! someone who understands!!! i also sketch, ppl are like why are the ppl so depressed!

message 25: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) ummmm........ mood swings? people who fuck up ur good mood, then people who put u back in a good mood then someone who ruins it again

message 26: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments Sounds like my life

message 27: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) i cant draw to save my life but i write a lot in my journal some really depressing shit that if any one saw theyd think id try to kill mysef, i have 3 pgs filled on wat i tink of "life suxs nd then u die"

message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

thats mii dad always says and he has a shirt that says that too

message 29: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments i dont do journals i express myself through art

message 30: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) Chiefo wrote: "i dont do journals i express myself through art

thats colz

Christy'sSooooFukinBored wrote: "thats mii dad always says and he has a shirt that says that too"

i want that shirt

message 31: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments what?

message 32: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) her dad has a shirt that say life suxs nd then u die

message 33: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments o i like that shirt

message 34: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) me 2!!

message 35: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments i hate happy ppl (imma bit random)

message 36: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) ((dont worry me 2!!)) me 2!!! sry im really hyper right now, im lik so much better when im calm

message 37: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments haha np

message 38: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) nd im doin home work, so much home work, i had all week to do it nd im doin it now

message 39: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments o i love!!! it sounded like me this morning i was so hunger

message 40: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 21, 2010 10:16AM) (new)

mee too... well oh that sounds good

message 41: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) thats good nd sad

message 42: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments Brianna wrote: "nd im doin home work, so much home work, i had all week to do it nd im doin it now"

at least its homework i have a test i havent studied for tomorrow

message 43: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) oh shit!!!! u just reminded me!!!


message 44: by Chiefo (last edited Feb 21, 2010 10:17AM) (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments hahaha and it keeps getting worse

message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

oh......well sorry bout the post i had to change it cause i put it on the wrong folder..

message 46: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments np

message 47: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) my teacher is evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

haha... its okay....

message 49: by Brianna (new)

Brianna  (whateven) she gives us 2 essays nd a 3 paragraphs to wirte over break then she gives us a test the day we come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

message 50: by Chiefo (new)

Chiefo (jksillygirl) | 26 comments you havent meet evil until you've met my math teacher she failed me in math for no fuckin reason

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