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message 1: by Kim (new)

Kim Crowley (kimcrow) | 1893 comments Quoting baxter here:

Shamelessly stealing from other group. Six words. No more, no less. Examples from others:

“Poision; meditation; skiing; ants—nothing worked.”

“Corpse parts missing. Doctor buys yacht.”


So yeah... go ahead and have a go...



message 2: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Death by motorboat. That's too bad.


message 3: by SQUEAK! (Lisa) (new)

SQUEAK! (Lisa) (fictionheart) Computer, low battery. Need recharge. Computer.


message 4: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Missing;gone. Disregarded hope and faith.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

New shoes or old shoes? Neither.


message 6: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Classic one by Hemmingway:

Baby shoes for sale; never worn.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Baxter wrote: "Classic one by Hemmingway:

Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "


That's not depressing.



message 8: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Baxter wrote: "Classic one by Hemmingway:

Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "

That's not depressing.
"


Totally not. Rather jolly in fact.



message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Baxter wrote: "Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Baxter wrote: "Classic one by Hemmingway:

Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "

That's not depressing.
"

Totally not. Rather jolly in fact.
"


Ha. That was six words.



Spiraling into depression; no one helps.


message 10: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments She laughs at purple, squishy elephants.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Horses love to gallop; cars speed.


message 12: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) That was all I could do.


message 13: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Tori; finished;done;ended: too late.


message 14: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) I will never do that again.


message 15: by Kriss (last edited Feb 21, 2010 08:57AM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
He was very sad he died.


message 16: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I forgot, you remembered. To die.


message 17: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) No dying, I tell him. None.


message 18: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It was horrid,that he left.


message 19: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) Finaly free. Why do I cry?


message 20: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments THIS SENTENCE DOESN'T REALLY MAKE SENSE.


message 21: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) Keep reading at life's risk.


message 22: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Hello ladies and gentlemen! Come in!


message 23: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments She sat forlornly at the piano.


message 24: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments A breeze breathed through the curtains.


message 25: by Laura (last edited Feb 21, 2010 12:06PM) (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Dust was fairy sparkle at sunset.


message 26: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments Lemon meringue pie decorated his face.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

He clapped when the generator blew.


♫♥Selena♥♫ (wertyiu102) | 338 comments THIS IS JUST LIKE A HAIKU!!

Hey, that actually works, you know!

Oh my gosh!! That one too!!!

Okay, I should stop that now...


message 29: by Laura (new)

Laura  | 911 comments She laughed evilly and couldn't stop.


message 30: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) Wow. Four right in a row.

Hahaha. I laughed for fun. Hahaha.

Pictures always kill. Really. Believe me.


♫♥Selena♥♫ (wertyiu102) | 338 comments I couldn't help myself. I laughed.

For the first time, I loved.


message 32: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) I stood silently. Watching. Waiting. Listening.


message 33: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) We started to run. I faltered.

I would never forget it. Ever.

When will it end? At death.

How many are there possible? Millions.

Millions, yes. Just take a few.


message 34: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 21, 2010 12:15PM) (new)

He shivered in the cold cell.


message 35: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) I am the one and only.

I am death. I am pain.

He will die by my hand.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

His first breath was his last.

(No, I'm not morbid at all.)

We couldn't survive. Not like this.

I finally knew what "happy" meant.

This was the end of it.

I am fresh out of ideas.

Or maybe I'm not. Who knows?

"You can't!" I screamed, panting. "No!"

I'm the world's most random person.

He didn't understand. He never would.


message 37: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) I was at peace. Finally. Forever.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

There is no peace; not here.


message 39: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) There never was. Not here, anyway.

Just another day, just another life.

Just another boring life of mine.


message 40: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments I was completely and undeniable lost.

Life is like a onion. Smelly. :)


message 41: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) I am not, yet I am. (can it be 8 word story?) How ironic.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

I still cried myself to sleep.

Time passes slower when you're miserable.


message 43: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Ironing board; no squeals. Please, no.


message 44: by Aviva (new)

Aviva (newtimelord) How do you tell someone lies?


message 45: by Laura (last edited Feb 23, 2010 07:01AM) (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments School: a fate worse than death.


message 46: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "His first breath was his last.

(No, I'm not morbid at all.)

We couldn't survive. Not like this.

I finally knew what "happy" meant.

This was the end of it.

I am fresh out of ideas.

..."


I love the first one... it's extreamly fitting to one of my characters in a story, actually.


message 47: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 5015 comments Mod
Unmemorable feelings; just love and loss.


message 48: by Laura (new)

Laura (xmagical) | 405 comments How can you truly love someone?

I was alone in the world.


message 49: by Madelyn (new)

Madelyn (mad31lina) | 8 comments Happy, CRASH. Inconsolable and depressed. Suicide.

Wow. Reflecting on that, I am clearly an extremely happy person. Just one big ball o' sunshine. *snort*


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

Where am I to go now?


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