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New shoes or old shoes? Neither.
Baxter wrote: "Classic one by Hemmingway:
Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "
That's not depressing.
Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "
That's not depressing.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Baxter wrote: "Classic one by Hemmingway:
Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "
That's not depressing.
"
Totally not. Rather jolly in fact.
Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "
That's not depressing.
"
Totally not. Rather jolly in fact.
Baxter wrote: "Anna (Maxy) wrote: "Baxter wrote: "Classic one by Hemmingway:
Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "
That's not depressing.
"
Totally not. Rather jolly in fact.
"
Ha. That was six words.
Spiraling into depression; no one helps.
Baby shoes for sale; never worn. "
That's not depressing.
"
Totally not. Rather jolly in fact.
"
Ha. That was six words.
Spiraling into depression; no one helps.
Horses love to gallop; cars speed.
He clapped when the generator blew.

Hey, that actually works, you know!
Oh my gosh!! That one too!!!
Okay, I should stop that now...

Hahaha. I laughed for fun. Hahaha.
Pictures always kill. Really. Believe me.

I would never forget it. Ever.
When will it end? At death.
How many are there possible? Millions.
Millions, yes. Just take a few.
He shivered in the cold cell.
His first breath was his last.
(No, I'm not morbid at all.)
We couldn't survive. Not like this.
I finally knew what "happy" meant.
This was the end of it.
I am fresh out of ideas.
Or maybe I'm not. Who knows?
"You can't!" I screamed, panting. "No!"
I'm the world's most random person.
He didn't understand. He never would.
(No, I'm not morbid at all.)
We couldn't survive. Not like this.
I finally knew what "happy" meant.
This was the end of it.
I am fresh out of ideas.
Or maybe I'm not. Who knows?
"You can't!" I screamed, panting. "No!"
I'm the world's most random person.
He didn't understand. He never would.
There is no peace; not here.

Just another day, just another life.
Just another boring life of mine.
I still cried myself to sleep.
Time passes slower when you're miserable.
Time passes slower when you're miserable.
Anna (Maxy) wrote: "His first breath was his last.
(No, I'm not morbid at all.)
We couldn't survive. Not like this.
I finally knew what "happy" meant.
This was the end of it.
I am fresh out of ideas.
..."
I love the first one... it's extreamly fitting to one of my characters in a story, actually.
(No, I'm not morbid at all.)
We couldn't survive. Not like this.
I finally knew what "happy" meant.
This was the end of it.
I am fresh out of ideas.
..."
I love the first one... it's extreamly fitting to one of my characters in a story, actually.
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Shamelessly stealing from other group. Six words. No more, no less. Examples from others:
“Poision; meditation; skiing; ants—nothing worked.”
“Corpse parts missing. Doctor buys yacht.”
So yeah... go ahead and have a go...