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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

why do you post chapter two here... can't we just read it through the first post..???


message 2: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Dayna wrote: "why do you post chapter two here... can't we just read it through the first post..???"

To let people know that there is a chapter 2 to read.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

The Trying to be Optimistic Pessimist (Dayna) wrote: "Chapter 3:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/6...

I just realized that my chapters are quite short. Oh, well."


no- it's GOOD that the chapters are short.
i purposely make them short because it's easier to read, and doesn't overwhelm the audience :D


message 4: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I should read this story. *puts it on list*


message 5: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments *scoffs* it's probably better than mine!


message 6: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Prove it. *grin*


message 7: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Oh dang, it looks like I've got some reading to do!


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I'M HERE!


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

ME TOO!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay! I"ll go read it!


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

I read the first three chapters and gave you some constructive criticism on chapter three. I'll read the other five chapters a little later.

It's totally awesome, though!


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yay! I'm being helpful.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

The Trying to be Optimistic Pessimist (Dayna) wrote: "Yahoo! Thank you Cassie. I love you even more.

*Clicks heels like shown on Berries and Cream Skittles commercial*"


haha!


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

...Maybe...


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Wait, how many Daynas are there? (Did you see that comma? Nice, eh?)


Tesssss cool story broo | 527 comments Oh ok!


message 17: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Indecisive Dayna wrote: "http://www.goodreads.com/photo/user/2...


I uh... I don't remember how far I've posted up until, so BAM. That's all of Scarred right now."


I do believe that is a picture of Juliet eating a cupcake, not Scarred.


message 18: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Neon City. Coolio that's a pretty beastly name.


message 19: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
I say this too often I think, but you are amazing Dayna.

That story was ten kinds of cool and five kinds of awesome.


message 20: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
I read it! I LOVE IT SO MUCH.
And I don't even know why I like it so much, I just do. :)


message 21: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
You should. Absurdest is the most fun thing ever to write. NUTS TO COMMON SENSE!


message 22: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Aw, no prob. I just enjoy having a buddy who is writing the same kind of stuff as me.


message 23: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Haha, I just finished rereading The Doughnut Man.

What a story.


message 24: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Of course it is. After all, I'm in it.


message 25: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
You laughed because it's TRUE.


message 26: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Yeah, that's right you did. BOOM!


message 27: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
DAYNA DAYNA DAYNA

I just realized that we never did write a story together like we planned on. NEED TO GET ON THAT.


message 28: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments Aw you guys are so cute.


message 29: by Annemarie, hi (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 3393 comments Mod
Baxter wrote: "DAYNA DAYNA DAYNA

I just realized that we never did write a story together like we planned on. NEED TO GET ON THAT."


Oh, being the creepy stalker I am, I was just thinking about that too. I think a Baxter/Dayna story would be one of the most awesome things ever.


message 30: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments I AGREE!!


message 31: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I was wondering when you guys were going to do that, as well...


message 32: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
It's decided then! We are going to
STOP
COLLABORATE AND LISTEN


message 33: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
FIRST STEP COMPLETED!


message 34: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
DANG GOOD COLLABORATING DAYNA. DANG GOOD.


message 35: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Right. Finger snapping all over the place.

It needs to be completely redonkulous and weird. Hmmmmm....


message 36: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
That's what I was thinking. The ultimate absurd story could be crafted.


message 37: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
SLOW
UNDER


message 38: by Ky (last edited Jul 11, 2010 10:33AM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments {You two are frigging hilarious.}


message 39: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments {That I do, that I do, Dayna.}


message 40: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
NO NO NO NO NO I'M GETTING SOMETHING HERE I'M GETTING SOMETHING

SLOW MOTION....AAAAAAND SOMETHING TO DO WITH THE UNDERGROUND. LIKE A CAVE OR SOMETHING. ONLY A CAVE THAT IS UNDERGROUND.


message 41: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
YES. A SUBWAY.

Wait a second though, that's not quite strange enough. I got GOT IT! THE SUBWAY IS GOING SOMEWHERE STRANGE. SOMEWHERE...NOT QUITE NORMAL.


message 42: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Somewhere that doesn't quite exist?


message 43: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
HOLY JEEZUM YES. IT'S A SUBWAY THAT IS ALWAYS GOING. And so everybody there has been there for ages, and is sure that they want to get to the destination that the subway is headed towards, but none of them no what it is. BECAUSE IT'S NOTHING.


message 44: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Oh. My. Goodness. Gracious GREAT BALLS OF FIRE! AGREED!

We have it through the perspectives of each of the passengers then.


message 45: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Drat, I love old men. Okay, then I get a middle aged, washed up dude.


message 46: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Fair enough.

By the way, to ensure SUPER crazy, I say each person has to have something completely ridiculous and strange happen to them. Or at least moderately strange.


message 47: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Oh boy. Okay. I'll try to have one of the characters things done by tomorrow morning.

THIS IS GOING TO BE THE GREATEST THING EVER!


message 48: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
How do you mean?


message 49: by Julian (new)

Julian Moreno (emmieloowhoo) | 7315 comments I say you each post one chapter...


message 50: by Baxter, butts butts butts (new)

Baxter (julietrocksmysocks) | 2455 comments Mod
Oh I see what you mean.

Do you have any particular way that would work best or anything?


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