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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Completed 90k literary novel

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message 1: by Samuel (new)

Samuel Moss (perfidiousscript) | 1 comments 90k word completed manuscript (~360 pgs.), my second novel. Follows a Mexican American teenager as she is discovered and molded into a teen pop star. Other elements include a covert Christian Morality bureau, a character that fuses his identity with the internet, a reclusive monk living in the middle of an amusement park, an endless cult video game and a mysteriously disappeared woman around which all these events revolve.

Like to think it is in the vein of Delillo, Gaddis, Murakami et c. Some parts innovate heavily with language.

Calling it 'Swallow in the Abattoir'

Would love some feedback on it.

message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Sam, when you get to the point of needing an editor, please take a look at my website...

Your story looks intriguing and right up my alley.

Good luck with your novel,
Jim Dodds

message 3: by Sharon (new)

Sharon Umbaugh | 382 comments Sounds fascinating! My beta reading/editing service specializes in literary fiction. Please contact me at so we can exchange details. I would like to read a sample.

Sharon Umbaugh

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