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Share/Advertise Your Writing > Please Vote For My Short Story In the Inkitt Epic Worlds Contest

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message 1: by Amelia (last edited May 07, 2015 07:11PM) (new)

Amelia Nichole Defield (amelianichole) | 9 comments Hi all!

I would really appreciate it if you would be willing to give my story a read and vote in the Inkitt Epic Worlds contest -->

The contest ends on June 3rd! :D

message 2: by Ava (new)

Ava Dohn | 19 comments An interesting synopsis, but the time flips disconnected me from the story. Chapter 1 held me to the end, as did chapter 2, 3, 4, and 5, so it was great connective writing. The story seems way too detailed to be a short story though. And the repetition in chapter 5 wasn't as smooth as it could have been, either done with alternate perspectives in comparison or done with a shorter repeat of the same information in a longer view.

message 3: by Amelia (new)

Amelia Nichole Defield (amelianichole) | 9 comments I appreciate your honest feedback and I will take it into consideration for the final ebook. :)

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