Please Vote For My Short Story In the Inkitt Epic Worlds Contest

[Amelia]

Hi all!

I would really appreciate it if you would be willing to give my story a read and vote in the Inkitt Epic Worlds contest --> http://www.inkitt.com/stories/13703

The contest ends on June 3rd! :D

[Ava]

An interesting synopsis, but the time flips disconnected me from the story. Chapter 1 held me to the end, as did chapter 2, 3, 4, and 5, so it was great connective writing. The story seems way too detailed to be a short story though. And the repetition in chapter 5 wasn't as smooth as it could have been, either done with alternate perspectives in comparison or done with a shorter repeat of the same information in a longer view.

[Amelia]

I appreciate your honest feedback and I will take it into consideration for the final ebook. :)