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message 1: by Winifred (new)

Winifred Morris | 17 comments Okay, it's true, I'm totally diy. Cheap. And I'm thinking of revising the cover of Bombed, even though it's out there and not doing too badly. Here are the new covers I'm consider as well as the current one. I'd appreciate any comments. It's a comic romantic thriller. yellowJohn
teal current Thanks!

message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Stay with the original - it has "more impact"

Pun intended, but true!

message 3: by G.G. (new)

G.G. (ggatcheson) I like the one with the fire the best.
I don't like the green one at all.

message 4: by Winifred (new)

Winifred Morris | 17 comments Thanks! Here's another try at it, keeping the flames, but putting the little town in. What do you think? flamesJohn Also, do you like my name in red or white?

message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

I think putting the town in detracts from the impact. I can't tell if you have a black outline around the type as well as the black shadow, but I'd suggest adding it if you don't.
The little town may be relevant to your story, but I think it's confusing on the cover...which is very strong without it.

message 6: by G.G. (new)

G.G. (ggatcheson) Or if you really want to keep the town, remove the guy on the right of it?

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