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Looking for an Alpha reader for a YA contemporary

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message 1: by Emily (new)

Emily | 1 comments I have a YA contemporary with a little suspense. It is still in the rough stages, I'm looking for what I need to work on as far as plot.

Lily was hoping for another snow day but she hadn't intended on being snowed in without power, most importantly the internet where she spends all her free time role playing with her online friends on a site completely dedicated to role playing.
Then she realizes her only choice of staying warm is to join the annoying boy-next-door and his snot-caked nose little brother in front of their fireplace. Biding her time until her mom comes home, but the snow only gets worse and cell phones go down as well as landlines. Parent's can't make it home, or even call. The neighborhood is full of older people who abandon their homes for the winter, besides Lily and the boys-next-door. They find themselves alone. Food is beginning to run out and there doesn't seem to be an end in sight as the snow continues to dump.

message 2: by Amanda (new)

Amanda MacCabe (amaccabe) | 1 comments Hiya,

I'd love to be a beta reader for you! Send me a message. :-)

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