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Apr 22, 2015 04:26PM

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Well, I'm writing a story currently (it's in the creative writing section of my profile) and I want to know if it's any good.
Thanks. I'm on chapter 9 right now.
Hi! I'm wondering if you guys can help me. Im thinking of starting a book, and I need your opinions on my idea. here is the info….
Main Character Name: Charlotte Baster + Brody Keel
Time period: future
Genre: Fiction/Romance
Year: 27,004
Takes Place: In future USA; USA is split into two areas that cannot (or must not) unite or there will be war: Lithia and Gera. Whole "continent" is known as Ethernia (like eternity).
Origins: Charlotte is from Lithia, Brody is from Gera
Charlotte: rich girl, good education, works as a fashion designer w/ mom
Brody: not poor but not rich, works as a writer for a newspaper and an author
How they met: they were at the border when they saw each other. It was love at first sight. Brody found out about Charlotte and he figured out where she lived. Charlotte was surprised when Brody came to her store. From then on, they met in secret.
Main Character Name: Charlotte Baster + Brody Keel
Time period: future
Genre: Fiction/Romance
Year: 27,004
Takes Place: In future USA; USA is split into two areas that cannot (or must not) unite or there will be war: Lithia and Gera. Whole "continent" is known as Ethernia (like eternity).
Origins: Charlotte is from Lithia, Brody is from Gera
Charlotte: rich girl, good education, works as a fashion designer w/ mom
Brody: not poor but not rich, works as a writer for a newspaper and an author
How they met: they were at the border when they saw each other. It was love at first sight. Brody found out about Charlotte and he figured out where she lived. Charlotte was surprised when Brody came to her store. From then on, they met in secret.
Hmm, I was thinking like that. This will be in the future, so resources are preserved, and you can only have a portion of food. I GOT IT!!!! Whenever it is breakfast, lunch, or dinner, a bell rings and the citizens must go to "eating halls" to receive their proportion of food. Thanks Ravenleaf! :)
Joan wrote: "so what do you think is the best genre for writing?"
I think that paranormal is a great genre of writing- sorta like what I am doing- but what ever ideas you have are good sources of inspiration. If you want, you can message me.
I think that paranormal is a great genre of writing- sorta like what I am doing- but what ever ideas you have are good sources of inspiration. If you want, you can message me.

Hello.
Honestly i tried to do a book once when i was 9 and i just flopped with the grammer. I think i also tried to make like five other books while i had not even finished the first one. *facepalm*
Honestly i tried to do a book once when i was 9 and i just flopped with the grammer. I think i also tried to make like five other books while i had not even finished the first one. *facepalm*
I am working on a book, its in the Creative Writing.


I love writing. I'm too addicted to my stories, characters, songs.

So this book I am writing was always going to be about a Girl named Mya, pretty much following her as she grows up. Now the book was going to include Little flashbacks to her fathers life, told through letters that he wrote, though he is already dead. But, recently I had the idea that instead of telling the Father's Story through letters, what if I made the whole book in his Point of few,as he watches his daughters life unseen as a type of ghost and then we would flashback in his Point of view. I don't know, what do you guys think. What idea to you like the best.
