Seeking a Beta Reader for My Middle Grade Novel (Literary, Complete at 42k)

[Tatjana]

Hello,

My middle grade novel Dunja's Magic has gone through many rounds of revisions (including the revisions suggested by my critique partner), but before reaching out to literary agents, I'd like to get some feedback from a beta reader as well. I'd be open to having just the first seven chapters of my novel (Act 1—approx. 9K words) reviewed, or it could be the entire novel.

Here is the blurb for the book:

At eleven, still with all the blind trust of childhood, Dunja believed her father when he kept telling her the same things he'd told her all her life: that magic was the only thing that made life worth living; that once you saw real magic, like he did—a magician pull a rabbit out of an empty top hat—you could never forget it; and that you couldn't live a life without believing in magic. When her often-absent father disappears completely one day, Dunja knows it's up to her to bring him back and restore the integrity of her and Mama's shattered lives.

Lorenzo, a surly and impulsive homeless man who moves into the tunnel under 95, offers Dunja glimmers of hope. In his homeless encampment, he happens to have things such as a top hat and a rabbit that have Dunja convinced he could teach her how to do the top-hat-and-a-rabbit-magic, which, Dunja believes, will lead her to learning enough magic to bring her disappeared father back. But working with Lorenzo brings nothing but challenges that Dunja's friends try to mitigate—her pretty friend who can't stop drawing butterflies; the wild-eyed one who Dunja wishes were her little sister; the boy who plays the guitar and sings mountains; and the fairy-tale store owner whose store has everything there is in the world. With her group of friends by her side, Dunja learns about much more than magic: friendship, forgiveness, acceptance, and finding meaning in the life around her.

Thanks in advance!

[Liz]

Hey Tatjana,

I'd love to beta read for you. I tried to DM you on here but I think you may have that feature turned off. To discuss details, please get in touch with me here on Goodreads or at my email: bookwormlisa@gmail.com

Thanks and have a good one,

Lisa

[Racheal]

Hello,

I'm interested in your manuscript. If you would like to work with me, you can contact me via jegedetemitope78@gmail.com.
Thank you!

[Cielo]

Hi Tatjana!

My name is Cielo, I have three years of verifiable experience as a beta reader. I'd love to work with you.
My service includes:
-Thorough feedback report addressing elements such as plot and character development, narration and writing style, plot holes and inconsistencies, pacing, etc.
-Inline comments with my reactions and/or specific suggestions.
-The option to answer up to 20 questions you may have on your story, which you can submit either before or after receiving my feedback. This is optional, and you can choose to omit this.

My rate is $1 per 1000 words and I can deliver feedback in June. Here is my service page in which you can check testimonials from past clients and more detailed info on my service: https://bellerosereads.wordpress.com/...

If you're interested in working with me, please contact me via email: cielobellerose@gmail.com

Thanks!
-Cielo.

[Helen]

Hi Tadjana,

Your blurb sounds great and I would love to be a part of your success story. If you're interested in my services, please contact me here https://www.fiverr.com/s/kLx6o5k or send me a message at helenarzard@gmail.com if you do not want to work on Fiverr.

Thanks,
Helen

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[Emmanuel]

HI Tatjana,
Congratulations!
If you're still interested in a beta reader, I'd be happy to help. you can go ahead and place your order at https://www.fiverr.com/s/pdpx8jp for $40 to get your indepth feedback in 5 days.
Hoping to hear from you.
Warm regards!
Emmanuel

[Ayesha]

Hi Tatjana,

Love this blurb. It sounds like a fun read. I am interested in beta reading for you.
My website, www.wordcraftedits.com has more information about my services, examples of my commenting style, and testimonials. There are also more testimonials on my Goodreads thread: https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...


Thanks,
Ayesha
aag2474@gmail.com

[Dana]

Hello Tatjana,

The premise of your book sounds endearing! It sounds like a coming-of-age book whose premise can tie the magic of being a kid along with more mature thematic material.

You can view my blog and beta reading terms here! https://prestoverse.blogspot.com/p/be..., for 42k we can negotiate a lower price than those listed.

And there's some additional testimonies here: https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

My email: prestovibe@gmail.com
Hope to talk to you soon!

[Emily]

Tatjana wrote: "Hello,

My middle grade novel Dunja's Magic has gone through many rounds of revisions (including the revisions suggested by my critique partner), but before reaching out to literary agents, I'd lik..."

Hi Tatjana,

If you are still looking for beta readers please feel free to reach out. I have worked with several middle grade novels. Children and their belief in magic is one of my favourite aspects of middle grade books, whether there is actual magic or just the idea that it has to exist in it.

I have some available openings at the end of June currently.

Please check out my website for more information about me, my services, and testimonials. Proofreading And Editing | E. Gray Editing (egrayediting.com)

I hope to hear from you soon.

[Bassey]

Hello authors
In celebration of the new month I will be offering a free first chapter read to authors. My rate for other chapters is $0.00005 per word and the turn around time is maximum of one week. You can reach me on my dm or via email at basseyblessing118@gmail.com. Will be expecting your lovely manuscript.

[Melinda]

I am interested in beta reading your book. It sounds like an amazing story. I am trying to get back into beta reading after a hiatus and this would be a wonderful start. I have beta reading experience with a variety of genres and would love to find out if we are a good fit. I have worked with authors on Goodreads, Amazon, and Upwork. I am excited to get started since I love to read and review books. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you all the best in your book's success whether you choose me to work with or not. I'm flexible with the price and my turnaround time is whenever you need it to be.

[Lana]

Hello, I'd be very interested in reading your full manuscript. I am an experienced and affordable beta reader.

My feedback includes the following:
- Overall feedback on character/character dynamics, setting, plot, pacing etc.
- Detailed in-line comments on your text
- A "review" and a "rating" of your novel
- I will fix grammar and spelling mistakes as I come across them
- I will answer any questions you have about my feedback or any specific questions about your work
- I also have a quick turnaround rate

Please email me at stillwritingforever@gmail.com if you're interested!

[Haley]

Hi Tatjana,

I'd love to give your book a read! I have 9 years of experience as a beta and proof reader. My turn around is 5-10 days depending on the length of the piece.

I provide in-line feedback as well as an end report.

my webpage is-
haleysproofreadingandbetaservice.wordpress.com

please email haleybo@hotmail.co.uk if interested.

[David]

Hey, as a beta readeer I can provide you my honest feedback in characters, pace of the story, plot development and an overall impression. Keep in mind I would give you my honest opinion. Also my packages are pretty affordable for what they provide you with. I have a cheaper package that I'll read up to 25k words and It's just 20 dollars. My premium one, I'll read up to 100k words and it's just 65 dollars, what a bargain. We can always negotiate prices. I have a profile on Fiverr, where you can get to know me better and also see my reviews. I can also send you 2 of my works. In case you still have any doubt, you can email me: davidthompsonwriter@gmail.com or just add me on discord: davidthompson98 for more info.