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message 951: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I, so I was wondering...so I could find a way to get back home." She smiled. "But I suppo..."


He looked at her hand, slightly suspicious but shook it.
"I'm Jade...."


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KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "Angelina followed and then leaned against the stone brick wall.
She checked her nails for a moment, picking off a scab, and then took her wand out of her pocket and twirled it around her fingers as..."


He looked at Angelina.
"Uh which one?" (that's Jade...uh thats not what you say to your girlfriend...like uh nvm)


message 953: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I, so I was wondering...so I could find a way to get back home." She smil..."


"Nice to meet you." She looked around, "I wondering where I can get back to my kingdom, though, as you see my aunt, Ashalena would be looking for me about now..." She paused for a moment, and then added, "But I suppose there is nothing I can do it about it. Also, I like your daggers."


message 954: by [deleted user] (new)

(ow)


message 955: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 03:16PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex then hopped out a window and died.

the end."


(No! How about one of my characters talks to her or something? :) So she isn't being ignored)


message 956: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 03:16PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "((I'm kidding I'll delete it))"

(I know you are. ;) I just wanted to go along with it...)


message 957: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I, so I was wondering...so I could find a way to get back ho..."


"You what?" He'd never really heard any compliments about her daggers except from Kyra.


message 958: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "Angelina noted this new information, storing it in her mind. “Have you ever sparred before, Gwen?” she asked, trying the new name out on her tongue."

"Not...really, I am more of a fencer than a sparrer." Gwen replied.


message 959: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I, so I was wondering...so I could find a wa..."


"I like your daggers, I think they're pretty neat, I have some daggers too." Gwen replied, revealing a few daggers she kept about her. "For when I...uh, need them."


message 960: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 03:20PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) (I'm giving Jade a break from someone who dislikes him, and introducing him to someone who will not attack him and also thinks he is cool.)


message 961: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "(I'm giving Jade a break from someone who dislikes him, and introducing him to someone who will not attack him and also thinks he is cool.)"

((aww thanks )


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KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "One of Angelina’s eyebrows raised slightly at what Jade had said, and was confused at what this ‘Gwen’ was doing- she wondered if this new girl was merely complimenting him or if she was trying to ..."

((ooh jealous hahah))


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I, so I was wondering...so I co..."


"Oh...okay. Thanks I guess." He glanced at her daggers. He noted there condition....and sharpness. "You know how to fight with them?"


message 964: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "One of Angelina’s eyebrows raised slightly at what Jade had said, and was confused at what this ‘Gwen’ was doing- she wondered if this new girl was merely complimenting him or if she was trying to ..."

Gwen looked over at Angelina, what was looking at her for? All she had done was talk about his weaponry...
"..What?" Gwen asked, suddenly feeling uncomfortable.


message 965: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 03:25PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I, so I was won..."


Gwen looked back at Jade. "Yes, I've been training for years..." She replied. "I hope to use them more in the future....though, because I've been training to use them for a very particular reason..." She didn't really want to get into what the reason was, but she thought she would at least mention it...


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""

"Neither do I,..."

"Have you sparred before?" He asked, curious.


message 967: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""..."


"Not really, as I said, I am more of a fencer than a sparrer." Gwen replied. "But, I would like to learn if possible..."


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what thi..."


"I can teach you some if you want."


message 969: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 03:31PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don..."


"I would love that." Gwen smiled.


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KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "(I’ll be off for a bit.)"

(kk byee <3)


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, ..."

"Okay." He took off the belt around his chest, and set it aside. He'd only use his main 3 daggers. "Do you usually face people taller or shorter than you?"


message 972: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Hey Carsie!))


message 973: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, befo..."

"Uhh...taller." replied Gwen, quickly, trying to figure out how to describe the opponent, "though usually average height." She paused she was shorter, due to the fact that she was still growing due to the pains of being a teenager, "and are usually skilled in, um, shapeshifting, which I am skilled in too, but yes that is what I usually do..." She paused, "but you don't need that power. It's just...um, my dream opponent." Though 'dream' did not describe it...very well. It was more complicated than that.


message 974: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin frowned, a little confused.
"I'm sorry? How did you want me to answer that?""


"I mean, does your world have gods...?? Not really pondering whether or not they exist, but does it have gods..." replied Annabelle.
"Like does your world have a religion, or religions of any kind?"


message 975: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((I'm trying to hold her down! *Alex starts to wiggle away* NO! STAY!))


message 976: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He blinked..."

"Okay. For taller people, always aim for the legs. Do they use swords, daggers or staffs?"


message 977: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wr..."

"I mixture of swords and daggers." replied Gwen, "It just depends on the day."


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"Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two daggers, one in both hands. His metal cuffs were still on. (like this except pure metal and hard to dent https://pin.it/6cex72b)


message 979: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin shrugged.
"Well yea, we have superstitions and religion and half a dozen creation myths and stories. Some of them are more believable than others.""


Annabelle couldn't believe she was getting into this, but she decided to carry on, "which ones do you believe in?" She asked bluntly, perhaps hanging around Ophelia too much had gotten to her.


message 980: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two daggers, one in both hands. His metal cuffs were still on. (like this except..."

Gwen drew out her sword and put it at the ready, "Alright, so I suppose we should begin?" she smiled.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two daggers, one in both hands. His metal cuffs were still on. (lik..."

"Mhm!" He rolled his shoulders a bit, and got ready. He feigned an attack to her right arm, before kicking her in the shin.
"Do you see what happened here?"


message 982: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two daggers, one in both hands. His metal cuffs wer..."

"I do." she replied, "I wasn't ready was I? I didn't react quick enough..." hoping that the fight was paused, so she could think of what to do next.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two daggers, one in both hands. His me..."

"Exactly. You were also expecting me to fight at your sword. Most fighters believe that their opponents will either aim for their sword, or chest up....that's why you aim for the legs. Try again?"


message 984: by [deleted user] (new)

((nooooooooooooooooooooo that ssad)


message 985: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Alex can teach him about religion))


message 986: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Denada))


message 987: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Ummm...she accidentally walks into the room with him and Annabelle?))


message 988: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Er...she being Alex))


message 989: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 04:12PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin blinked. These were some...personal questions.
"I don't...don't think I believe...well..."
He exhaled.
"I don't know. I haven't really paid any mind to religion. It's never mattered enough. T..."


"Oh, I'm, not a cultist. I just have a religion that involves gods who give mortals magic, there's a difference between having a religion and being in a cult." Annabelle replied, hoping she was not giving off the wrong impression. "Also sorry, that was a strange question..."


message 990: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two daggers, one in bo..."

Gwen moved forward and aimed at his legs, she managed to get towards them and hit it (though she made sure not to injure him when doing so). "Is that...better?" Gwen asked.


message 991: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He drew out two dagge..."

"Good. Unless they've been trained, and most aren't, to block their legs then that'll work. If they used swords, it'll be a little harder for them to get it from up where they usually hold it, down to block their legs. Daggers a little hard to block with too, because their not as long, but their lighter. If someone attacks your legs, take a step back as you see the weapon coming, and whack them either in the head or chest. Their weapon will be down by your legs, so they'll have to get it back up and block. Understand?" He aimed an attack at her legs.


message 992: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: "((Haha I getcha. Eenin is being Eenin and insisting on not being rude, so I'll wrangle him out of there once he's somehow convinced he won't wildly offend Annabelle by leaving.
EENIN COME ONNNNN YO..."


(Sorry misread your response. I am very tired...)


message 993: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I guess." He dr..."

Gwen moved back away from him, moving away from the dagger that was coming. "Was that good? I could also change form, if someone were trying to do that." But she decided not to do that then, he was just teaching her...


message 994: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: "((xD. I think you read his response right. I'm trying to get Eenin to go find Alex cuz she's being a lonely child))"

(Oh no, I meant I read your response about Eenin leaving the room, as Annabelle leaving the room...Not what he said but what you said. If that makes sense.)


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight with daggers, I ..."

"Good, make sure your foot is okay, because they may swing immediately after and you don't need to be tripping over your feet. Also, try taking a bigger step backward. That distance is good for daggers, but because swords are longer...." He trailed off, hoping she understood.


message 996: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 04:19PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin nodded.
"Okay. Cool. Uh, yea there's definitely nothing like that where I come from. I don't think."
The corner of his mouth twitched upwards.
"Don't worry about. I get asked tons of weird qu..."


Annabelle nodded understandingly, "Oh alright, things that are unfamiliar can come off as strange or evil." She said, referring to the way he viewed the religion of the elves and humans, "But, I understand, um..." She paused, "well, what do you do for fun? Hopefully that isn't too personal a question." She added rather teasingly to the end part about it being 'too personal'.


message 997: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just harder to fight ..."

Gwen nodded, "Got it!" She then made an attack towards him and tried to stab his legs. "There is someone, I will need to fight in the future, so this will be very helpful...thank you."


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Okay. Swords are easier to block with daggers. Daggers are just har..."

"You're welcome." He said, taking a huge step backward, "Another good thing about stepped back, or to the side is, if they swing hard enough the momentum carries them forward and they fall." He smirked.


message 999: by Quinley (last edited Feb 21, 2022 04:51PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Carsie Rose wrote: ""For fun? I read. And explore the woods near camp. Sometimes I hang out with my friends. I don't have a whole lot of time to do things just for fun anymore. I mostly train, and study, and...yea. Wh..."

"I don't know if this would be described as for 'fun', since it isn't always fun." Annabelle began, slowly thinking about what to say, "But, I like to solve crimes and murders, I also like...um disguising myself as a man?" Was that really for fun? "You see, I do that, to um...Don't tell anyone this, but" he seemed confused enough, that she thought he would not care or share it. So, she whispered, "So I can work in the police department without anyone knowing it's me." She stepped back, "well, that's what I do for 'fun' and I do a 'normal' thing which is to read..."


message 1000: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Yeah, Alex is going to need a friend, since in this version of her past Michael dies. In the coffee shop that Alex's Michael lives. I haven't decided whether or not to kill him off in the real book))


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