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message 701: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex had successfully scooted all the way across the room without being asked more questions, when she heard her name pop up.


message 702: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 10:19AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) (Thank you :) )

Two voices came from the shadows,
"I'm telling you, I know exactly where I am going..." came a voice that appeared to be a man's voice.
"No you don't, and you don't even know this place" replied a voice that seemed to be a woman's though, it was very deep sounding and could easily be mistaken for a man's.
"Can't you two just not argue--" came a softer sounding voice that was sounded like a woman's voice.
"No!" exclaimed the first two voices.
Three figures emerged out of the shadows, two women and one man.


message 703: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex looked up and raised her wand at the three figures. She gave them a stern look. "Who are you." She kept her wand pointing at them.


message 704: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 10:25AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) The woman wearing a purple chiton stepped forward, and stopped the other two from going forward.
"I'm Ophelia, I'm a priestess to the gods of earth and air! And we come in peace!"
"I'm Detective Inspector Time and this Lady Annabelle of Dragon's Province" Annabelle glared at him, frustrated that she didn't get to introduce herself.
"And well, we're looking for my daughter, Marigold." he added, frustrated that he was stuck with two people who hated him.


message 705: by [deleted user] (new)

Jade stood quickly hearing the voices. He pulled out a dagger, scowling.
"What? How do we know it isn't a trick hm?"


message 706: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex didn't move her wand away. "Well...you're daughter isn't here. It's just me and them." She gestured to Jade and Angelina.


message 707: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) D.I. Time glared at the newcomers, now was a good time to use his magic on them he thought, perhaps he could move the weapons around...Maybe?

"Why would it be a trick?" asked D.I. Time, glancing at Annabelle and Ophelia.
"It's not a trick!" Annabelle interrupted, "we ended up here, I think by accident, and we aren't intending to hurt you, look." She emptied took her sword out and put it on the ground, unstrapped a weapon from under her leg and threw it to the ground.


message 708: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex wasn't sure. She'd been lied to a lot in the past.


message 709: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 10:35AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) "Can't you at least put that sword or wand down? It's making me uncomfortable?" asked D.I. Time.
"I'm a priestess, by oath, I cannot lie." Ophelia said, she was oddly calm about the dagger and wand.


message 710: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex scowled. "Fine." She put her wand back in her pocket, but she kept her left hand just above where the sheath for her knife was.


message 711: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hmph. And I'm the emperor and I kill people." Jade retorted sarcastically.


message 712: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 10:38AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) "What would make you believe that we're trustworthy?" asked Annabelle, disliking that this person was not being reliable with it, at least giving them a clue or something. "Because what you're doing now, makes me think you're the untrustworthy one." She turned her eyes in the direction of the dagger Alex had her hand on.

"...That's disrespectful both to me and the gods." replied Ophelia, glaring at Jade.


message 713: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex glared. "Because people are liars who love to stab others in the back. I've seen it before, I've experienced it."


message 714: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) "I know that from experience, I work...partly, I should say as a detective." replied Annabelle, "and I've seen people like that before amongst people whom I thought I trusted..."


message 715: by [deleted user] (new)

Jade snorted.
"gods. Right, okay." He rolled his eyes, sheathing his dagger but kept a grip on the handle.


message 716: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex just shoved her hands in her pockets and grumbled something.


message 717: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) "Once again, disrespectful, you act like the gods have no power over mortals, they do in fact have power over them..." replied Ophelia.
"...And you will regret your actions if you continue."


message 718: by [deleted user] (new)

"Would you shut up. There is no such things as gods, unless of course you're the emperor. So shut your snapper about these 'gods.' Your daughter isn't here, and now if you could leave, I wouldn't have to gut you." He gave a grin as sharp as a knife, a dark gleam in his eyes.


message 719: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Annabelle sighed, "Do...we need to do an interrogation or something? Because I hate to sit here all day."
D.I. Time nodded.


message 720: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex looked up. "Whoa wait what?"


message 721: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How do you think magic came to the world if...there were no gods? How do you think the world was created if there were no gods?"


message 722: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) "Did you not hear what I said? Do I need to repeat myself?" sighed Annabelle.


message 723: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How do you think magic came to the world if...there were no gods? How do yo..."

He glared back, thinking of 50 different ways he could kill this jerk.
"I said shut up. You will shut up....alive or dead."


message 724: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex glared. "I heard you the first time."


message 725: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 10:51AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How do you think magic came to the world if...there were no g..."

"It's a crime to kill a priestess" said Ophelia, glaring and making a small guest of wind swirl around her finger, it was a small dust-devil though it could get bigger if Ophelia wanted. "Besides, why does it matter what I believe? It's not like my beliefs are yours or stopping you from believing what you believe in!"


message 726: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How do you think magic came to the world if...th..."

"Exactly, therefore your rules aren't mine...which means killing you isn't a crime." He smirked, and glanced back at Angelina.


message 727: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex glared. "I heard you the first time.""

"Yes, maybe you did. But this form of interrogation is extremely unproductive." replied Annabelle and glanced at Jade trying to conceal her anger at him for angering Ophelia.


message 728: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex was just plain annoyed with these people. It would be nice to just jump and leave them to Jade and Angelina, but....she couldn't exactly do that without them noticing.


message 729: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How do you think magic came to t..."

"Um, murder is a crime in all cases. Unless you live in a country where murder is legal...Which I don't think exists...Murder isn't legal." said D.I. Time. "Though if do kill Ophelia, which I hope you don't..I am certain that you will punished by the gods of earth and air."


message 730: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How do you think ma..."

"Whatever. Do whatever you want to me." He opened his arms wide.


message 731: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex was just plain annoyed with these people. It would be nice to just jump and leave them to Jade and Angelina, but....she couldn't exactly do that without them noticing."

"Can you at least ask me anything? Anything at all?" asked Annabelle. "Because I hate just standing around..."


message 732: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex stepped up. "Although if you do try to hurt him, you'll have me to reckon with."


message 733: by [deleted user] (new)

Carsie Rose wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How..."

((yea.....XD)


message 734: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insulted mine. How..."

"You didn't murder anyone...yet. So I can't do anything. And no this isn't me asking you to commit murder...This is me saying I am not going to do whatever I want to you." replied D.I. Time.


message 735: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex stepped up. "Although if you do try to hurt him, you'll have me to reckon with.""

"If he dares lay a hand on Ophelia, then he will have me to deal with." Annabelle glared at Jade. "You've been warned." She glared at him, she didn't like this person one bit, especially not after how he treated Ophelia.


message 736: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon "Then I suppose if anyone of us tries anything with one another we'll have everyone to deal with." Alex frowned. Dang....that was a little confusing.


message 737: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: ""Then I suppose if anyone of us tries anything with one another we'll have everyone to deal with." Alex frowned. Dang....that was a little confusing."

"Pretty much" scoffed Annabelle.


message 738: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you so rudely insul..."

"Hah, you have no idea how many people I've killed."


message 739: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:05AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs then, since you..."

D.I. Time gulped, well, great, just great...He was in a room with a serial killer. A serial killer..."And you have no idea how many killers I've arrested and brought to justice" he replied.


message 740: by [deleted user] (new)

Carsie Rose wrote: "((KNEW IT. KNEW JADE WOULD SAY THAT🤣.
If I was Jade I'd say that too.))"


((ahhahahaa))


message 741: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult your beliefs th..."

"Mmm, you ever been paid to kill? Trained to kill? For....14 years? Hm?" Jade narrowed his eyes.


message 742: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex sighed. "And you have no idea.....actually, you know what, forget it." She crossed her arms and slumped into the corner.


message 743: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go forth and insult..."

"No, in fact I am the opposite of that. I've been trained to track down people like you, for several years actually, a lot longer than you've been alive for to be exact." added D.I. Time, this was very uncomfortable.


message 744: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:09AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex sighed. "And you have no idea.....actually, you know what, forget it." She crossed her arms and slumped into the corner."

"Perhaps." said Annabelle, turning to Jade, "you shouldn't have confessed to those crimes and threatened my..." She tried to find a word to explain it, "Uh, threatened Ophelia, in front of two detectives!" She looked back over at Alex, "aren't you going to try and figure out if we're trustworthy?"


message 745: by [deleted user] (new)

Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare you! I will go for..."

"I've been trained to hunt and kill people like you, and I've done so...many times. So why don't you and your "goddess" friend leave us alone. You're daughters probably dead by now."


message 746: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex looked up. "Jade!" She hissed.


message 747: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:12AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Ophelia glared at Jade, "How dare yo..."

"You wouldn't--" choked D.I. Time, now very concerned about Marigold's safety.

"Alright, first of all! She's not a goddess, she's a priestess!" exclaimed Annabelle, "There's a difference, she is devoted to two gods, the goddess of earth and the god of air, and if you dare do anything to her!" She took out a dagger, one she hadn't lied on the ground and pointed it at Jade, "I will end you!"


message 748: by [deleted user] (new)

Book wrote: "Alex looked up. "Jade!" She hissed."

He looked over at Alex, blank expression, and shrugged.
"It's true."


message 749: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Book wrote: "Alex looked up. "Jade!" She hissed."

He looked over at Alex, blank expression, and shrugged.
"It's true.""


"Wait...you killed my daughter?" asked D.I. Time still in shock, "you really killed her?"
"He's probably lying!" hissed Ophelia.


message 750: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex sighed. "No he didn't we haven't seen her, Jade is just pointing out how this castle is really dangerous and surviving here is.....difficult."


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