Beta reading for YA urban fantasy 89k words

[Kaia]

Hello, I'm looking for beta reading services for my Asian inspired urban fantasy story. It features vampires and magic system based on Chinese fantasy elements.

Synopsis:
Alex Zhao is a student at an international high school who just recently acquired precognition and emotional insight powers from his dreams. A series of events led to Alex discovering an energy vampire (undead being sucking qi instead of blood) threat in his school. Inheriting his long dead grandma's hunting tools and spiritual powers, Alex strives to eliminate the threat and protect his friends and family before they would fall prey to the energy vampire.

Thanks!

[Swati]

Hey Kaia! This sounds like such an interesting YA! Congrats on finishing it.

I offer detailed manuscript critique/beta reading services. You can view more details of my services here: swatihegde.com/services and reach out to me on geek@swatihegde.com if you're interested.

Hope to hear from you soon :)

[Nila]

Hello Kaia,
Congratulations on your book.
I have been beta reading for more than 5 years. Have sent you a DM with details.
Please go through my website for other terms and conditions.
https://digitalreadsmedia.com/beta-re...
My email address is digitalreadslibrary@outlook.com or
digitalreadslibrary@gmail.com
(There have been server problems recently, hence the dual mails)
Kindly let me know
Shalini

[Ayesha]

Hi Kaia,
I am interested in beta reading for you. I have more than 10 years experience and specialize in fantasy but especially enjoy YA fantasy. My website, https://whatayeshareads.blogspot.com/... has more information about my services, examples of my commenting style, and testimonials. There are also more testimonials on my Goodreads thread: https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...
I can return it by the end of December
I look forward to hearing from you.

Thanks,
Ayesha

[Archivist Reads]

Hi Kaia!

If you're still looking for beta readers I would love to work on our book.

The blurb sounds very interesting and I've been into Chinese mythology and mythology inspired novels for a while now so it would definitely be right up my alley.

I have a winter sale going on right now so I would be able to read your book for 55$. If you're interested contact me on here or send me an email at tealanna984@gmail.com.

Regards, Mars

[Cielo]

Hello Kaia!

Your story sounds amazing and I'd love to beta read it. I'm an experienced beta reader who has worked with over 50 clients in the past and Fantasy is my favorite genre.

My services are detail-oriented and include a three-part report (8 to 18 pages) addressing elements such as narration and writing style, plot and character development, worldbuilding, plot holes and inconsistencies, pacing, etc. I also add inline comments on the manuscript and give the option to answer up to 20 questions you may have on your story. I am able to adapt to each author's needs when beta reading a story.

My rate is $1 per 1000 words and I offer a free sample of the first 5 pages of your story, if you wish, to see if we'd be a good fit. I have availability for returning dates in early January.

Here is my website so you can check more details on my services + testimonials of past clients https://bellerosereads.wordpress.com/...

If you're interested in working together, contact me at cielobellerose@gmail.com and I'll reach back as soon as possible!

Kind regards,

Cielo.

[Nathan]

Hi

You won't beat my prices! Beta-reads by a highly experienced, well-read, professional.

Check out the details and my reviews on my web page: https://theroadtonathan.com/beta-reading

From there you can email me directly.
Unfortunately, I don’t beta-read romance or erotica.

Best, Nathan

[Alyssa]

Hey there!
I would absolutely love to read your MS and I frequently beta read YA.

I want to offer you:
- Insightful feedback at an affordable price.
- Notes and feedback per chapter.
- Overall analysis based on theme, character, plot, dialogue, and relationships.
- Spelling and grammatical errors if applicable.
- General reactions and impressions about plot, pacing, and consistency.
- Assurance that your manuscript will be polished for all agents and publishers

If you’re interested please send me a message on fiverr and I can create you an offer!

Alyssa

https://www.fiverr.com/s2/742151647e?...