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Feb 01, 2015 06:19PM

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When her and Tarver were on the planet for the first time, I was really frustrated with her because she was turning in to a damsel in distress, constantly needing saving. I was really happy to see her step up and become pretty awesome when Tarver was sick. It'll be fun to see her when she's back in her element now they have some electronic and mechanical stuff to work with.


I'm kinda frustrated right now because their relationship went so well and now it's kinda weird again..

The character development is so great and, at the moment, I'm kind of leaning toward celebrating the leaps and bounds Lilac has made in comparison to Tarver's. Not to say that Tarver was a perfect person to begin with, but he's had heaps of doses of reality to keep him grounded and make him appreciate things and weigh his thoughts a little bit better. He's a military prodigy and he's 18, so there's going to be some rough edges to smooth out as he matures. Then, there's also the issue of him being knocked out from a fever for three days and it gave us more insight into how Lilac thinks and acts on her own now that there's someone else relying on her. With pre-crash Lilac, she had her entire world handed to her, assured that her dad was coming for her, and that she could care less what happened to Tarver after they were picked up. Now she's setting camp and catching herself thinking about what would be the most useful to their survival, trying to convey to Tarver in her own flawed, sweet, awkward way that she cares about him and cares what happens to him after, and even to explain why acted the way she did and how it stemmed from fear of her father destroying him.
She's grown to accept their predicament and rather than lamenting the loss of her fortune and cushioned life - she fashions herself into a survivor. She recognizes what she's doing wrong and how her actions can effect others, especially since she can't just walk away from her sole company indefinitely. That her sole source of company actually matters to her and someone she can trust. Their progress feels very real for their age with the circumstances being what they are, to me. Lilac admitted that they need to figure out what exactly it is that's hanging between them and what they're going to do about it. So there's a setup for a responsible conversation and much more character growth.
The Whispers and flowers has my mind in overdrive trying to crack what ever it is that's going on on the abandoned planet. I'm really satisfied with the pacing and results. A little sad there's only roughly a hundred pages left, but I digress.
Also - otp: space alligators...or was it crocodiles?

"He's drowning. And I'll drown with him." Not out loud, but come on Tarver take a hint!
And I do have a new found love for Alec. He was in two pages but the entire time he tries to talk about Lilac, like he never even left. Like everything was normal.
And that kiss, oh that long awaited kiss. I think what I really like is that the angst of the story isn't just faked. Like, you can't see that happening to anyone else. But for this love angst, you (or at least me) can see the possibility for some truth. Tarver is genuinely afraid that when, or if, they are found Lilac will go back to her old life and he will never see her again. And he doesn't want to let her go. But Lilac doesn't understand that. Although, she wants to get Tarver back to his family no matter what, even though she doesn't think she will be able to get back into her old life. I like it, it's realistic.
AND I KNEW IT!!! I knew something with the way Lilac treated Tarver back in the first few chapters had to do something with her father and a boy she fell in love with and that's why she doesn't let anyone else fall for her (but it's too late, Tarver loves you). She pushes people away and treats men horribly and even has (had) her cousin to force her to treat Tarver with distaste. Lilac didn't want to do it in the first place. See, Lilac is definitely the type of character that if she wasn't a point-of-view characters, we'd probably hate her for the way she treated Tarver but because we can see what she thinks about Tarver and the secrets she hides, we kind of want nothing but good things for her. I want more.








Okay, go back to reading."
Just thought you should know, most people on this thread have only read up to chapter 28. Thanks for the spoiler haha :P

Lilac has made so much progress! She didn't annoy me at the beginning, but I have to admit she's grown some balls.
I guess when you're stranded on an alien planet you kind of have to :P

I just love how Lilay has changed during their stay. She's so brave and try to do everything to help Tarver while he's sick and she just wants him to be safe. I loved Alec. He just talked about Lilac with Tarver and I just thought all the time: Yes! I totally agree.
However, it's so sweet that Tarver just don't want to see her leave him and that's why he's so distant.
The long awaited kiss was also really cute, though Tarver pushed her away. I really hope that now that she told him why she was so cruel at the Icarus and why she pushed him away I just hope he will be honest to her as well.
I'm so excited about this book and I really have no idea what's all about the whispers and visions and I can't wait to find it out
I'm so glad I've finally started reading this book! It's honestly better than I ever expected it to be. Wow
I'm so glad I've finally started reading this book! It's honestly better than I ever expected it to be. Wow




I am looking forward to seeing more world building! I'm ready for more than just the mountains, trees, and plains. I can't wait to get a back story on what happened to this planet, who might possibly still be there, and what's causing the voices!

bit delirious from being tired right now
its 10:30pm and im gonna read now cause i have 24 1/2 hours till the liveshow and 200 pages left

My favorite part so far.. So funny! :)"
Yeah, it was really funny :D