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Navi' Robins | 5 comments Good afternoon. I need your opinion on my book blurp. This is for a contemporary romance novel. Thank you all in advance.


Dr. Daniel Bennett is a man with a secret that haunts him while he’s awake and threatens to kill him while he sleeps…

A great career, financial stability, and the looks to attract any woman he chooses; Dr. Daniel Bennett was a man that had it all. Until the day an encounter with Africa’s most notorious and ruthless warlord ends in a massacre and a brutal murder he hasn’t been able to forget or forgive. Four years later the once outgoing and celebrated doctor has become a cold and heartless recluse; content on living a life free of emotional connections or commitments. Until the United Nation’s top crisis counselor the incredibly beautiful and determined Ayana Burundi walks into his life forcing him to face the darkest moments of his past. But for Ayana there is only one thing driving her and that’s bringing the warlord Kronte “The Terror” Kroma before the international courts to answer for his crimes against her people and the doctor is the key to her accomplishing that goal.

What began as a simple request quickly turns into a struggle of wills and emotions as Daniel and Ayana’s lives are sent on a crash course with love and a warlord willing to do anything to silence anyone that stands between him and his freedom.


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How about this?

A great career, financial stability, and the looks to attract any woman he chooses, Dr. Daniel Bennett was a man that had it all. But he is also a man with a secret that haunts him while he’s awake and threatens to kill him while he sleeps. Four years ago an encounter with Africa’s most notorious and ruthless warlord that ended in a massacre and a brutal murder he hasn’t been able to forget or forgive. The once outgoing and celebrated doctor has become a cold and heartless recluse, intent on living a life free of emotional commitments.

When the United Nation’s top crisis counselor, the beautiful and determined Ayana Burundi walks into his life forcing him to face the darkest moments of his past there is only one thing driving her. To bring the warlord Kronte “The Terror” Kroma before the international courts to answer for his crimes against her people is her goal, and the doctor is the key. What begins as a simple request quickly turns into a struggle of wills and emotions as Daniel and Ayana’s lives fall into a collision course between love and a warlord willing to do anything to silence anyone that threatens his freedom.


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