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[B]

  “Whenever he was with Holland, he forgot about everything plaguing his mind, his shortcomings and failures. With her, he didn’t have to try to be someone he wasn’t, to be something more than simply himself. He wasn’t a prince or a pit lord. He was just Kellen, whoever that was. She didn’t ask anything more of him than that.”

[B]

which is the best?

[Hershey]

Bhavya wrote: " “Whenever he was with Holland, he forgot about everything plaguing his mind, his shortcomings and failures. With her, he didn’t have to try to be someone he wasn’t, to be something more than simp..."

I like this the third one

[B]

  “Whenever he was with Holland, he forgot about everything plaguing his mind, his shortcomings and failures. With her, he didn’t have to try to be someone he wasn’t, to be something more than simply himself. He wasn’t a prince or a pit lord. He was just Kellen, whoever that was. She didn’t ask anything more of him than that.”

[B]

my review is super long and not fitting exactly, so i am making the font small

[Hershey]

Bhavya wrote: "my review is super long and not fitting exactly, so i am making the font small"

I think it depends on the characters?

[Niharika✩]

Aashi wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "my review is super long and not fitting exactly, so i am making the font small"

I think it depends on the characters?"

me too

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "
“Whenever he was with Holland, he forgot about everything plaguing his mind, his shortcomings and failures. With her, he didn’t have to try to be someone he wasn’t, to be something more than sim..."

second one

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Copy pasted from my review"

ooh yes that is there, but this was written years ago. good observation! :)"

I get that but I do think that proper formatting wasn't invented ten years ago!
Thanks!

[B]

  
    “Some things are worth the pain.”
  

[Hershey]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "my review is super long and not fitting exactly, so i am making the font small"

I think it depends on the characters?"

me too"

you depend on characters too?

[Niharika✩]

Aashi wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Aashi wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "my review is super long and not fitting exactly, so i am making the font small"

I think it depends on the characters?"

me too"

you depend ..."

I've never reached the limit so no?

[B]

Bhavya wrote: "my review is super long and not fitting exactly, so i am making the font small"

yes i know it depends on characters. the 'blockquote and italics' takes a lot of space so removing that part cuts i down

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "

“Some things are worth the pain.”

"

That's kinda hard to read

[B]

Here's my review. Let me know how the font is (and any other feedback!)
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "

“Some things are worth the pain.”

"

That's kinda hard to read"


aah it is only a 1 line quote.

[B]

Bhavya wrote: "Here's my review. Let me know how the font is (and any other feedback!)
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

can you'll please help

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Here's my review. Let me know how the font is (and any other feedback!)
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

can you'll please help"

one sec

[Niharika✩]

I still think it's hard to read. The best of the lot is this quote:

“Let yourself feel it. (...) The pain. You need to let yourself feel it. If you don’t, you’ll never let it go. If you shove the pain away, if you ignore it, you won’t move past it. (...) Feel it. Don’t make yourself numb.”

at least I think so.

[Ash (inkwordsandash)]

Hey Bhavya, just read your review. it's great; my only one critisism is that you could probably use less bold for the quotes...

[B]

Booklover wrote: "Hey Bhavya, just read your review. it's great; my only one critisism is that you could probably use less bold for the quotes..."

ok! thanks. :)

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "I still think it's hard to read. The best of the lot is this quote:

“Let yourself feel it. (...) The pain. You need to let yourself feel it. If you don’t, you’ll never let it go. If you shove the ..."

aah i will try and see if that fits. though if i do that for all, won't it be hard to read?

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "I still think it's hard to read. The best of the lot is this quote:

“Let yourself feel it. (...) The pain. You need to let yourself feel it. If you don’t, you’ll never l..."

That true. Lemme see

[B]

this is the problem when there are so many quotes...

[Niharika✩]

I think it'll look good even if it's all bold. . .but if you want, the next best option could be to unbold it. Or you could put the <*p*>. . .<*/*p*> HTML

[Niharika✩]

I think it'll look good even if it's all bold. . .but if you want, the next best option could be to unbold it. Or you could put the <*p*>. . .*p*> HTML

[B]

I FOUND AN ALTERNATIVE

[B]

“They were so different. Lesa was hard, and Adley was soft. Lesa didn’t care enough, and Adley cared too much. And maybe if they had met in any other circumstances, they never would have wound up wrapped around one another. But somewhere along the way, things had slid into place.”

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "

“They were so different. Lesa was hard, and Adley was soft. Lesa didn’t care enough, and Adley cared too much. And maybe if they had met in any other circumstances, they never would have wo..."

YESS

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya help

[B]

HOW DOES IT LOOK NOW?
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya help"

what do you need help with?

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya help"

what do you need help with?"

What characters other than the Pevensie kids should I talk about? And Aslan

[Niharika✩]

and the White Witch

[Niharika✩]

"The player slapped his cards against the table, leaned back in his chair and grinned."

looking off

[Niharika✩]

b>“That was the problem with Ethen and all the men like him. He thought because she was quiet, because she liked books and the way flowers blossomed on the hills in spring, because she was a girl, he could dismiss her as frivolous and unimportant. Weak. He was wrong.”

The formatting didn't happen 😂

[Niharika✩]

“Some things are worth the pain.”

you know my opinions

[Niharika✩]

In the part of the characters, it's not centered. Did you mean it to be that way?

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "b>“That was the problem with Ethen and all the men like him. He thought because she was quiet, because she liked books and the way flowers blossomed on the hills in spring, because she was a girl, ..."

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: ""The player slapped his cards against the table, leaned back in his chair and grinned."

looking off"

i changed those!

[B]

i don't think there are any more characters in narnia

[B]

Bhavya wrote: "i don't think there are any more characters in narnia"

ooh what abt the animals lucy meets?

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "i don't think there are any more characters in narnia"

Mr and Mrs Beaver

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "In the part of the characters, it's not centered. Did you mean it to be that way?"

yes i did that on purpose or it gets to annoying to read

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "i don't think there are any more characters in narnia"

ooh what abt the animals lucy meets?"

What animals?

[Niharika✩]

Mr. Tumnus

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "In the part of the characters, it's not centered. Did you mean it to be that way?"

yes i did that on purpose or it gets to annoying to read"

the opposite oh

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "i don't think there are any more characters in narnia"

ooh what abt the animals lucy meets?"

What animals?"

yes those only. Mr Beaver etc (i do not remember the spelling and names)

[B]

Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "In the part of the characters, it's not centered. Did you mean it to be that way?"

yes i did that on purpose or it gets to annoying to read"

the opposite oh"

is it annoying to read?

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "In the part of the characters, it's not centered. Did you mean it to be that way?"

yes i did that on purpose or it gets to anno..."

It is kinda. I think it;s not standing out much.

[Hershey]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika✩ (Hiatus) wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "i don't think there are any more characters in narnia"

ooh what abt the animals lucy meets?"

What animals?"

yes those only. Mr Beaver etc..."

And the fox. I loooooove the fox