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[Axolotl_7]

Bhavya wrote: "LiteraryFox ☾ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Aah I have around 2 hours of Jane eyre still left. This book is so boring no 😭"

BHAVYAAAA I SENT U A FRIEND REQUEST PLZ CHECK IT OUT (u don't have to accept of..."

Yay thank youuu

[[deleted user]]

Hi there
I did some maths and now I feel ~productive~

[stu]

yay, i just did maths too, ugh

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LiteraryFox ☾ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "LiteraryFox ☾ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Aah I have around 2 hours of Jane eyre still left. This book is so boring no 😭"

BHAVYAAAA I SENT U A FRIEND REQUEST PLZ CHECK IT OUT (u don't ha..."

❤️

[B]

Navya wrote: "Hi there
I did some maths and now I feel ~productive~"

Don’t we love being productive. Good job Navyaaaa

[[deleted user]]

Blobbie! wrote: "yay, i just did maths too, ugh"

ugh is right

[[deleted user]]

i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk

[Axolotl_7]

Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

aww :/

[stu]

Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

awwwwwwwww

[[deleted user]]

i'm trying not to repeat words at this point but i have no idea how to make my sentences sound not-boring

[B]

Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

I relate. This is why I decided 3rd person for my work, which I’m also terrible at, but it’s better than my first person.

But I liked the ch you wrote in first person PoV. I don’t think you’re bad at it!

[B]

Navya wrote: "i'm trying not to repeat words at this point but i have no idea how to make my sentences sound not-boring"

Just write, you can edit through later. :)

Would you be surprised if I told you that each time I repeat a word in my book I highlight it in my google doc 😬

[Mrunal]

writing a ToG review is so painfully boring! 😭

[Mrunal]

Mrunal wrote: "writing a ToG review is so painfully boring! 😭"

Should I write it sometime later? I can't concentrate enough right now

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

I relate. This is why I decided 3rd person for my work, which I’m also ..."

Ahh I also use third person. I have at least five POVs, and I'm doing some in first person and the others in third.

And also, thank you so much! *screaming*

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm trying not to repeat words at this point but i have no idea how to make my sentences sound not-boring"

Just write, you can edit through later. :)

Would you be surprised if I tol..."

No, not at all, shockingly.

[[deleted user]]

Mrunal wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "writing a ToG review is so painfully boring! 😭"

Should I write it sometime later? I can't concentrate enough right now"

I guess you can draft one now for your immediate thoughts and work on it later!

[Nash (all too unwell)]

I have given up trying to write a tog review😂

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Mrunal wrote: "writing a ToG review is so painfully boring! 😭"

Atb💜

[B]

Navya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "writing a ToG review is so painfully boring! 😭"

Should I write it sometime later? I can't concentrate enough right now"

I guess you can draft one now for your immedi..."

I agree.

[B]

Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm trying not to repeat words at this point but i have no idea how to make my sentences sound not-boring"

Just write, you can edit through later. :)

Would you be sur..."

😳

[B]

Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

I relate. This is why I decided 3rd person for my work, ..."

Oooh looking forward to it

[B]

You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash...

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

I relate. This is why I decided 3rd person..."

Ahaha thank you

The pressure

[B]

Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

I relate. This is why I dec..."

No pressure intended. Sorry.

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

1. Your writing is beautiful and the opposite of trash

2. I relate so much it's concerning

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm writing a chapter of my book and i realised that i'm terrible at first person so
vuyugihufggutdfukvufgfjk"

I relate. Thi..."

Noo I'm kidding :)

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Nashita wrote: "I have given up trying to write a tog review😂"

There is nothing that stood out to me or nothing that made me wanna talk Abt this book.

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Navya wrote: "i'm trying not to repeat words at this point but i have no idea how to make my sentences sound not-boring"
U can do it😌

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Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

1. Your writing is beautiful and the opposite of trash

2. I relate so much it's concerning"

Aw thanks. That’s so nice of you ❤️

I know right! My eternal fear is someone calling me out for this. 🤭

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

Noo your writing is not trash

[B]

Nashita wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I have given up trying to write a tog review😂"

There is nothing that stood out to me or nothing that made me wanna talk Abt this book."

Same. But I want to write a rant so...

[[deleted user]]

Nashita wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm trying not to repeat words at this point but i have no idea how to make my sentences sound not-boring"
U can do it😌"

Ahhh thank you I hope so

[B]

Nashita wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

Noo your writing is not trash"

Aww thank you so much 💕

[Mrunal]

Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

Somebody told me to not self-depreciate. 🙄

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I have given up trying to write a tog review😂"

There is nothing that stood out to me or nothing that made me wanna talk Abt this book."

Same. But I want to write a..."

Lovely.

[B]

You’ll are so nice 🥺♥️

[[deleted user]]

i get so stressed when people see the first chapter on gr but they dont say anything like

d o y o u h a t e i t

but its probably that people are just busy

[[deleted user]]

i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa

whats his name

casteel

or hawke

yeah that guy

*shudder* make it stop

[g.vee]

Nashita wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I have given up trying to write a tog review😂"

There is nothing that stood out to me or nothing that made me wanna talk Abt this book."

Just rant it then and react to the places it was just boring or stupid and all. I did that to my review of We Were Liars. I did not feel anything except anger so everything came out really fast. And that is probably my longest review lol

[B]

Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

Somebody told me to not self-depreciate. 🙄"

Shhh you must not call me out

[Mrunal]

Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

Somebody told me to not self-depreciate. 🙄"

Shhh you must not call me out"

I was just repeating what you told me.

[B]

Navya wrote: "i get so stressed when people see the first chapter on gr but they dont say anything like

d o y o u h a t e i t

but its probably that people are just busy"

I feel you

[B]

Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "You know, sometimes I think I should not critique books as my own writing is trash..."

Somebody told me to not self-depreciate. 🙄"

Shhh you must not ..."

🤗❤️

[[deleted user]]

Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa

whats his name

casteel

or hawke

yeah that guy

*shudder* make it stop"

because 1. looks wise i guess he's similar
2. he keeps calling a younger girl by a nickname
3. he doesn't explain things very much when the girl wants
4. slight half-kidnapping

should i just print my book and burn it

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i get so stressed when people see the first chapter on gr but they dont say anything like

d o y o u h a t e i t

but its probably that people are just busy"

I feel you"

No but really
It happens

[B]

Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa

whats his name

casteel

or hawke

yeah that guy

*shudder* make it stop"

because 1...."

Write some good qualities for him as well. Make him be the humorous one, so people wait for his page time and maybe make him very loyal?

[B]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa

whats his name

casteel

or hawke

yeah that guy

*shudder* make it sto..."

Just a suggestion btw.

[B]

Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i get so stressed when people see the first chapter on gr but they dont say anything like

d o y o u h a t e i t

but its probably that people are just busy"

I feel y..."

With me too

[[deleted user]]

Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa

whats his name

casteel

or hawke

yeah that guy

*shudder* make it sto..."

That's good advice, merci.

He's only really there in flashbacks or backstories and does make a cameo in present time but I think it should be fine