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[B]

And what I’ve written sucks plus needs a lot of editing

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I’m rambling. Feel free to ignore.

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Mango wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Any other feedback? :)"

Oh yeah! Well I'm mostly very picky on grammar, but really bad at writing...

But, the moment when Bartha says she has info on Johnny's father is a bit brief..."

Yes, I will expand in it more. This is only part of the story. :)

[Mango]

I hate procrastinating and love it lol.

Ooh what theme are you doing?

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Niharika wrote: "I like it! Though is this going to be a book?"

Thanks.
Nope, a short story. :)

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Mango wrote: "I hate procrastinating and love it lol.

Ooh what theme are you doing?"

Same
I’m doing it for bookmarked. Revenge is the theme. :)

[Mango]

Bhavya wrote: "Mango wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Any other feedback? :)"

Oh yeah! Well I'm mostly very picky on grammar, but really bad at writing...

But, the moment when Bartha says she has info on Johnny's father ..."

Alright! :)

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika wrote: "I like it! Though is this going to be a book?"

Thanks.
Nope, a short story. :)"

Ooh. All, we don’t what happens you should put this on your blog Abd continue it

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Niharika wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Niharika wrote: "I like it! Though is this going to be a book?"

Thanks.
Nope, a short story. :)"

Ooh. All, we don’t what happens you should put this on your blog Abd continue it"

Yes I am going to continue it.
I’ll put it in my writing group tom maybe.

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Any predictions on where it goes from here? 🤔

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https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Any predictions on where it goes from here? 🤔"

Johnny tries to find his father and it ends with a happily ever after

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Bhavya wrote: "https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

I can hear navyaa panicking

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

I can hear navyaa panicking"

Hmm anyways night!

[B]

Niharika wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Any predictions on where it goes from here? 🤔"

Johnny tries to find his father and it ends with a happily ever after"

Hmmmm 😊

[B]

Niharika wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

I can hear navyaa panicking"

Hmm anyways night!"

Goodnight! :)

[Mrunal]

Bhavya are you going to sleep?

[Mrunal]

I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet.

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Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya are you going to sleep?"

Probably not immediately. Might stay up till 12

[B]

Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story.

[Mrunal]

Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya are you going to sleep?"

Probably not immediately. Might stay up till 12"

Oooook!

[Mrunal]

Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

I'm reading ToG. I completed 10 agonizingly boring chapters today.

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You? :)

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Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

I'm reading ToG. I completed 10 agonizingly boring chapters today."

Oh no :/

[Mrunal]

Bhavya wrote: "You? :)"

I'll be up till I feel sleepy...

[Mrunal]

Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

I'm reading ToG. I completed 10 agonizingly boring chapters today."

..."

Was worth it! I'll get a good rant out of it.

[raina]

Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

good luck Bhavya!
ur gonna need it if u plan on completing the entire story😂
but I have faith in ur writing skills, and ik the story is going to end up being perfect :))

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Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

I'm reading ToG. I completed 10 agonizingly boring cha..."

Yay!

[B]

Mrunal wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "You? :)"

I'll be up till I feel sleepy..."

Ok. Take rest though, don’t stay up all night. ❤️

[Niharika✩]

Ohh before I log off, https://www.goodreads.com/user_status...

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Raina wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

good luck Bhavya!
ur gonna need it if u plan on completing the entire story😂
but I h..."

Aww thank you 🥺♥️

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Niharika wrote: "Ohh before I log off, https://www.goodreads.com/user_status..."

🤭

[raina]

Bhavya wrote: "Raina wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

good luck Bhavya!
ur gonna need it if u plan on completing the entire ..."

welcome 😀

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Niharika wrote: "Ohh before I log off, https://www.goodreads.com/user_status..."

🤭"

Ikr! I couldn’t believe it when I first read it

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Raina wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Raina wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "I'm just asking because I'm not so sleep yet."

Same, I need to finish my story."

good luck Bhavya!
ur gonna need it if u plan on complet..."

❤️

[Nash (all too unwell)]

GUYSSS
MY FBAA RANT IS UP
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

[Marie]

Nashita wrote: "GUYSSS
MY FBAA RANT IS UP
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

the review is great!

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Nashita wrote: "GUYSSS
MY FBAA RANT IS UP
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

AMAZING REVIEW

[stu]

Nashita wrote: "GUYSSS
MY FBAA RANT IS UP
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

Great! Reviewww!

[Niharika✩]

Nashita wrote: "GUYSSS
MY FBAA RANT IS UP
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show..."

RANTS ARE THE BEST

[Orla]

HI BHAVYA HOW ARE YOU
how's the writing going?

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Orla wrote: "HI BHAVYA HOW ARE YOU
how's the writing going?"

Hi!
It is going okaish. I managed to write till 1300 words. I still need to write more,

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Hiii gm!

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Thank u guys💜❤️

[Niharika✩]

Nashita wrote: "Hiii gm!"

morning!

[B]

Good morning!

But now I need to go, so bye 👋

[Niharika✩]

Bhavya wrote: "Good morning!

But now I need to go, so bye 👋"

byee!

[stu]

Morning

[B]

I am back

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I need to finish my story. Then edit it so it doesn’t suck completely, but it’s still going to suck after editing 😳