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Rhystlynne's Writing > Forgotten Song (Poem)

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message 1: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments (view spoiler)


message 2: by Marie (new)

Marie (naturechild02) Nice! I get wonderful visuals with this!


message 3: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Beautiful!


message 4: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thank you!
it took forever to get the words to sound right


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Wonderful, I play the clarinet obsessively and even though that wasn't necessarily what the poem was about. I still related.


message 6: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments This poem is meant to reach all musicians and music lovers. Although I was thinking more about the tunes and rhythms that you can hear in the absence of music, It also applies when there is music. :)


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Travis Berketa (travisberketa) | 555 comments Mod
The poem gave me an image of an old blind pianist sitting in an empty theatre, playing the piano for one last time. Loved it!


message 8: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Cool. I love hearing what people imagine when they hear my poems. It makes me feel like what I wrote could actually be real instead of just words on a page.


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