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Rhystlynne's Writing > The Puppet Show Corner (Poem)

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message 1: by Rhystlynne (last edited Jan 29, 2015 04:25AM) (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments (view spoiler)


message 2: by em_panada (new)

em_panada EEEKk! I LOVE this!!!!! I actually wanted to write marionette story, it was kind of a darker spin of (Disney's) Pinocchio.


message 3: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments My poems don't make any sense...


message 4: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thanks Emmeline! :)

Puppets are fun!


message 5: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Rhystlynne wrote: "My poems don't make any sense..."

Nah, they make perfect sense. ;)


message 6: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Do they? They just seem really out there, I guess. :)


message 7: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments I just added another line because when I transferred it over, the last line got cut off.


message 8: by em_panada (new)

em_panada I think I actually kind of like the new ending. It just makes the other scene come to life a bit more.


message 9: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thanks I wrote it with this ending, but the sentence got lost in the transfer. :)


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Love it Rhy


message 11: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments thanks :)


message 12: by Travis (new)

Travis Berketa (travisberketa) | 555 comments Mod
What a great poem! It has feeling and a great (but sad) story. Well done, Rhystlynne!


message 13: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments :) thank you


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