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Rhystlynne's Writing > Puppet Show of Space and Time (Poem) (favorite)

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message 1: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments (view spoiler)


message 2: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Wow, I love the descriptive and the rhythm on this one Rhy! Great job!


message 3: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thanks...I wrote this in the middle of my history class...I have no idea where it came from. :)


message 4: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Well it's brilliant nonetheless!


message 5: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments :D


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:)


message 7: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments :)


message 8: by Travis (new)

Travis Berketa (travisberketa) | 555 comments Mod
As a teacher - reading that you wrote this during your history class, I think "Great writing!" You create such wonderful images with your words.


message 9: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thanks, Travis. and as for writing during class, it didn't take long and we weren't doing much that day anyways. :)


message 10: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments I think this is my favorite poem so far


message 11: by Kaylie (new)

Kaylie | 59 comments This is a fantastic poem! I love the rhythmic flow of the words. The imagery is amazing too. I'm picturing Time Lords and Daleks! Too much Doctor Who for me lately, sorry. :)


message 12: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments That's okay. Doctor Who is awesome...keep watching it. :)


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

I wish I was just productive when we weren't doing anything in class. Me, I'm just like freetime awesome, now I can daydream and do nothing for 10 minutes.


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Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments :)


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