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Let's be honest here, he has to have a sarcastic personality. :D
Maybe a sporty personality as well? :)
Should he be bigger and tougher or on the smaller side??
Maybe he should be someone who shows that everything is alright but only he knows it isn't.And yeah he should be a tough and a tall boy, who is nice to everyone but doesn't let anyone enter in his premises!
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Brown maybe? Hairs that kind of fall on his forehead.Messy brown hair look awsome. And yeah piercing blue eyes are good.
Because of the blue eyes and brown hair probably Anglo-Saxon but with like maybe a British or Irish accent, got to love the Irish accent.With the clean back story idea, we can't have it perfect cause that's not relatable at all and the character would be to disconnected to the reader you know? So maybe a family members death or a traumatic experience in his life? But not to much.
And maybe a piercing somewhere, maybe a ring on his lip or eyebrow?
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Okay... How about his girlfriend died and so now he's really confused with his life, you know?
And Irish accent sounds great...
Okay, we need someone he like, i don't know, falls in love with. Should it be a guy or a girl? I'm thinking it should be a girl because he can tell her he's like bad for her or something because he has interest in guys too. Does that sound good to you guys?
Yah, whats his type though. Is he into girly girls and guys or independent strong (mentally and or physically) guys and girls? Cause it can means lot for character development.
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Yes :). Kay clothing? Is he going to be preppy or a bit dark or like a hipster?I prefer the darker side of clothing myself with t shirts, jeans and leather/denim jacket's myself but I'm thinking him to be kinda nerdy, spouting references every now and again and wearing band/tv show t-shirts. Still sticking with the jacket though XD thoughts?
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You guys literally just perfectly described a boy I actually know XD. But I like the strawberry blonde hair for the girl. Maybe hazel eyes?
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Lee-lette wrote: "Yes, I like that. How about cherry pink lips.She could be like the pretty and shy nerd but if necessary is bold and totally BA"With black hairs maybe.
My typical character has raven hair, cobalt blue eyes and cute. lol
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So what about the plot?
Think that was semi-thought out. Someone dies or something and he doesn't know what to do? I think I got that right.....
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It's just a suggestion
Where'd you get the name? How do you come up with this stuff? It's really good.....
Not that the other plotline they made up wasn't good. It was.
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I think that all that is great. I think that only his best friends should know that he is bisexual. Maybe Laiyla should be a new girl there that the boy instantly likes.
His secret being leaked is a great idea. Then he will want to deny that he is. Maybe one of his best friends told one of THEIR best friends and it got around.
What do you guys think? I'm open to anything so we can try anything and agree on which idea works the best. OR we could mix the ideas together. I don't know how we'll do it, but we will figure something out. ;)
Maybe he was caught with the opposite sex and a girl he was chasing after(she's head cheerleader-a real witch) saw them together but stayed hidden. Then she told everyone.
First character I was thinking a boy...