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I suspect his remarks on genre - and even on Lee Child - didn't help the Booker cause but the Goldsmiths is perfect
And Graham - if you're back in Norfolk next week, don't forget to borrow a copy of The Water Babies


My urge is less to transgress genre boundaries than insult them ... writing specifically for a genre isn't just reductive, it's an attempt to hide, a form of cowardice.
If anything he more argues there is a genre of the sort of book that wins the Booker:
This novelist’s characters are like himself. They speak in clever & rounded sentences. They have caught life in a linguistic net, & found some odd fish there, & now they are going to tell you about it: not really at length, but in the end at more length than you suspected in the beginning.
It isn’t possible at this distance–the distance between writer & reader–to tell how much of the novel is “biographical”. If some of it is, there’s nothing we can do about it; if none of it is, well that’s a joke some decades old by now, & perhaps a little less joyful than it seemed in 1980. What is possible to say is that the acknowledgements page, written in the same tone as the book itself, is a very self-indulgent piece of work.


See here on Google books

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Blurry, estuarine-seeming streets in the centre of nineteenth-century Leeds; a version of Hampstead set on vague bluffs above shallow water; ambiguous figures observed on a vast, sloping, otherwise deserted quay. Sea change, taking place in damp air, foul weather, at a distance, at night. Everything liquidised. Where it wasn’t the moon shining on water, everything looked like the moon shining on water: it was hard to see what the artist had been thinking. Bathed in the transformational odours of care-facility cooking and floor polish, the traffic rolling in on the A316 like surf or tinnitus behind him, Shaw sat captivated until visiting hours were over and he was asked to leave. If all change is sea change, he thought on the train back to Mortlake, then he could describe his own crisis – whatever it had been – as distributed rather than catastrophic. Sea change precludes the single cause, is neither convulsive nor properly conclusive: perhaps, like anyone five fathoms down into their life, he had simply experienced a series of adjustments, of overgrowths and dissolvings – processes so slow they might still be going on, so that the things happening to him now were not so much an aftermath as the expanding edge of the disaster itself, lapping at recently unrecognisable coasts.

My urge is less to transgress genre boundaries than insult them ... writing specifically for a genre isn't just reductive, it's an ..."
I agree with you and the author, but I meant no disparagement in my comments. The Virconium material is what I think would come to mind with most people familiar with the name, and is well recognized and respected by critics in speculative fiction. I used to read a literary blog of his since it was linked to a series of literary blogs I would visit. I was happy to see it still going strong, though my time constraints have reduced my visits. On the blog, one can see a wide variety of interesting material and get some further examplew of his style.
https://ambientehotel.wordpress.com

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I see where GY's reservations come from. But, like Paul, I think the writing here is very different which means it deserves its place on this list. I, too, would have been happy for it to be longer: I wasn't bothered by any sense of repetition, and, in fact, that probably added to my enjoyment.
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"There is a lot to admire in the book – particularly its simultaneous air of a book where the author knows precisely what is going on and the reader has really very little idea at all but always feels on the verge of making sense of things. Which of course leads the reader very much in the situation of the two main protagonists.
It is also a book which is on the surface too repetitive but where in depth the repetition and replication is integral to the book. It felt very much like the text was so dense that even at a sentence level there was complexity which could be unwound, but that the complexity was of a self-similar nature: the book where pretty well any subset of the book contained and replicated the whole novel – perhaps I have invented a new way of describing this type of novel: a fractal novel. And that I think is highly appropriate for a book whose main location and theme is the liminal – the shifting and complex boundary of water and land. And also how appropriate that the depth of reading the book is very different to its superficial impressions."
It was just the additional reservations that I have which marked me down.




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At first glance, The Sunken Land Begins to Rise Again, winner of this year’s Goldsmiths Prize for innovation in fiction, doesn’t look as though it is doing anything out of the ordinary. It is not, like last year’s winner (Lucy Ellmann’s Ducks, Newburyport), the extension of a single sentence over a thousand pages; or, like Anakana Schofield’s Bina, written as a series of warnings on the back of envelopes. Nor does it, like DBC Pierre’s Meanwhile in Dopamine City (shortlisted for this year’s prize alongside Bina), split the page into dual narrative threads; and there are no Oulipian constraints for the author to contend with, such as missing out the letter “o”, as in Alice Lyons’s Oona.
But M John Harrison’s masterpiece, composed of regular chapters in which regular sentences form regular paragraphs, is precisely about not noticing when things are out of the ordinary. Framed as a conventional narrative, it contains nothing conventional whatsoever. The novel’s inventiveness is embedded in its very DNA, and the resurfacing of a primeval genetic coding also happens to be its subject.


I can’t imagine how much time and focus it takes to write an Oulipian paragraph, much less an entire novel and write it so that the story is more enjoyable than clever.

https://commapress.co.uk/books/settli...
His earlier collection is also available from them:
https://commapress.co.uk/books/you-sh...

Serpent's Tail has bagged a post-apocalyptic novel and a memoir from 2020 Goldsmiths Prize winner M John Harrison, who is leaving his long-term publisher Gollancz after 40 years.
Commissioning editor Luke Brown bought UK and Commonwealth rights for two new books from Will Francis at Janklow & Nesbit.
Serpent’s Tail will publish Fall Lines, a memoir that sets out to subvert the genre in 2023, and Anabasis, a post-apocalyptic novel the author describes as an "anti-The Road", and which is his follow-up to The Sunken Land Begins to Rise Again (Gollancz).



The Sunken Land won the Goldsmiths and deservedly so I think. He is a fascinating writer.



It also suffers from the same issue for which I criticised and GY defended Zorrie - GY review iirc correctly read something like “the only non white characters are green”.

I read the review in message 31 and think I didn’t give the book enough time, it sounds like a book that reveals more layers as it progresses.

I read the review in message 31 and think I didn’t give the book enough tim..."
I didn't get on with either - which makes it the only Goldsmiths winner I DNF'd
It's definitely a matter of timing but also I thought it was too conventional for that type of prize and I got bored - like I said it wasn't the right time.
It had already won the prize by the time I read it, and perhaps my expectations were unrealistic, but I didn't really connect with it either, though there were elements I liked, particularly the setting of the parts loosely based on the Severn valley area.
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