Gathering Of Dedicated Scribblers discussion

11 views
Archives > Cradle or Hell, Sci-Fi novel

Comments Showing 1-31 of 31 (31 new)    post a comment »
dateDown arrow    newest »

message 1: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Hi everyone! I am a first time author writing my first novel. Haha its weird calling myself an author but here we are. I am looking for some feedback on my chapters I have written so far and I hope you all enjoy them! I know there are some grammar mistakes and whatnot please don't focus on that I will correct those later.

Logline: The crew of a spaceship find themselves stranded on an alien planet where they must survive the harsh environment as well as the encounters with the mysterious locals.

Chapter 1: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 2: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 3: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 4: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 5: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 6: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 7: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 2: by Eleanor (new)

Eleanor | 75 comments Hi Daniel. Welcome.Thanks for your feedback on my chapter 7.


message 3: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Hi everyone. Just finished chapter 8. Please leave review! https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 4: by Eleanor (new)

Eleanor | 75 comments I left feedback for you.


message 6: by M.L. (new)

M.L. Rodriguez | 119 comments Daniel Zsombor wrote: "Hi everyone. Just finished chapter 8. Please leave review! https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-..."

I just reviewed your chapter 8.


message 7: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Thanks for all the reviews!


message 8: by Eleanor (new)

Eleanor | 75 comments Daniel Zsombor wrote: "Chapter 9 is up! https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-..."

Hi. I've just read chapter 9 and left a review there. If you have a chance, would you mind taking a look at my chapter 9, too? Thank you.


message 9: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Done and done. Reviewed both new chapters the story is very exciting! You will get some of the answers soon don't fret.


message 10: by Eleanor (new)

Eleanor | 75 comments Daniel Zsombor wrote: "Done and done. Reviewed both new chapters the story is very exciting! You will get some of the answers soon don't fret."

Thank you


message 12: by M.L. (new)

M.L. Rodriguez | 119 comments Just reviewed you chapter 9. If you could check mine out I would much obliged.


message 14: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 1.


message 15: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 2.


message 16: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments reviewed chapter 3.


message 17: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 4.


message 18: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 5.


message 19: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Chapter 6 reviewed.


message 20: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 7.


message 21: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Oh wow. Thank you Andres for all the honest reviews! Much appreciated feedback sincerely. You pick up well all the little inconsistencies.


message 22: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 8.


message 23: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 9.


message 24: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments It's my pleasure Daniel. GODS are here to help each other put out our best work. If all the GODS can find a couple reviewers in their genre, a few that they can benefit from their feedback and trust their opinions, we shall put out some great reads in the future.

Keep writing and enjoy the journey.


message 25: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 585 comments Reviewed chapter 10.


message 26: by Eleanor (new)

Eleanor | 75 comments Hi, Daniel. I've just reviewed your chapter 11.


message 27: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Thanks Eleanor for the review very helpful! I have been a bit slow with writing recently but I finally finished by Chapter 12. I hope you enjoy. https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 28: by Eleanor (new)

Eleanor | 75 comments Just reviewed chapter 12.


message 29: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments Finally finished another chapter! Chapter 13: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 31: by Daniel Zsombor (new)

Daniel Zsombor | 24 comments I have created a new thread for act 3 chapters.


back to top