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I finished my reread yesterday and felt it stood up pretty well.
The first time round, the Mackley expedition's story felt fairly dominant, which made the last third of the book a little anticlimactic, but this time I appreciated the contrasts and the overall structure much more.
The overall theme of romantic ideals and dreams being impossible to live by and maintain in an imperfect world links all of the components, and the arctic imagery and subtle repetitions are used very effectively throughout. For a debut novel it is a very accomplished piece of writing.
The first time round, the Mackley expedition's story felt fairly dominant, which made the last third of the book a little anticlimactic, but this time I appreciated the contrasts and the overall structure much more.
The overall theme of romantic ideals and dreams being impossible to live by and maintain in an imperfect world links all of the components, and the arctic imagery and subtle repetitions are used very effectively throughout. For a debut novel it is a very accomplished piece of writing.

Simon got on my nerves as well, but I did feel for Emily - poor thing, imagine the pain? Julie was a great character, and when she heard 'the news' about Emily and John, from her cousin - well that just took me completely by surprise!
Edward's escapades in the Arctic Circle were nothing short of rivetting, even though we knew what was going to happen - I was still hoping he'd come home.
A wonderful story.

Bretnie and Mark, I also found that Emily and Simon "tried my patience" even though I thought they were nicely developed as characters. What in particular got on your nerves about those characters? Do you think Emily's preoccupation with the Mackley story she grew up with was a wedge that created issues with her and Simon's relationship?
Was the cousin's revelation a shock to you all as readers? Was Emily's reaction believable?

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Hey Linda, I thought Simon was a bit of a pedant, I didn't like the way Julie had to make his breakfast 'exactly' how he likes it - found that a bit much, he just seemed a bit 'particular'. Emily, well I quite liked her and really felt for her, poor thing - she waited ages for Edward to return and then to have her son right under her nose while she played the Aunt- that was terribly sad.
The cousin's revelation - yep, didn't see that coming. But didn't you wonder why he would just blurt it out? Surely he could have been a little more sensitive, It certainly rocked Julie's world view.
My favourite character in the whole book was Julie (oh....and Emily). Loved the cat too - who wouldn't??

Mark, I agree that Simon was a bit obsessive compulsive. Julie annoyed me because she was so wound up in the Emily story that she was unavailable until her bubble was burst. Then, after a shaky period, she seems to have woken up. Perhaps it was her sister who snapped her out of it?
I was surprised that the reveal came from the cousin as opposed to some document/letter that Julie would come across in one of the boxes.
Emily's fate was the saddest. While her husband died without fulfilling his promise to see her again, at least he was pursuing his dream. I wonder if Emily could have moved out of her brother-in-law's house and made a life of her own, with or without her son? I found it hardest to relate to Emily as a real person. She seemed to be the prop that provided the pivot for the Julie Simone story.
I'm looking at the cover of the paperback I read and wondering about the symbolism of the preserved butterfly and how it is displayed and of the butterflies in the book. Thoughts?

I think my frustration was Julie didn't respond empathetically. Edward horny brother seems just as much, if not more, to blame than Emily. It wasn't like it was a sordid affair.
My beef with the Simon sections were it just felt too slow. But I thought his brief temptation into an affair was an interesting comparison against Julie's obsession with Emily and Edward's "romance."


I thought both Julie and Simon's sections were slow. Julie would just disappear and then reappear with an explanation about where she'd gone. I felt like we followed Simon more closely.
And then there is Emily. Her story covers a really long time with practically no action. Her liaison with her brother-in-law seemed spontaneously to me and quite natural. What did not seem natural was the rest of her life.
My comment was deliberately vague, but I think Edward, Emily and Julia all had unrealistic and somewhat romantic aspirations, maybe Simon too.


I liked Julia and felt empathy for her - she seemed to have got stuck in grief (the loss of Aunt Helen and her baby) just like Emily. The romantic illusions about Edward were a shield for her, that she had to lose to move forward. Her cousin was a bit abrupt, but he genuinely thought she would already have known the family secret.
I didn’t care much for Simon, probably my prejudice against anyone who kills creatures for their own aesthetic pleasure. He was trying to capture and fix Julia like his butterflies, but he had to let that idea go just as she let the idea of Edward go. His nearly affair with Sandra was pretty feeble, but it was very convincing, I thought.

Sackville's interplay of ice and snow and summer heat was quite brilliant I thought. I felt both!

I see Julia as the romantic. She has been fed a huge dose of the fairy tale love between Emily and Edward. She confuses the fairy tale with reality and spins a vibrant fantasy about their love. She is caught up in a fantasy realm which is more real to her than her own life. Reality will always come up short by comparison. She goes through the motions of the day, but her heart and mind is embroiled in the fantasy of Emily and Edward. She wants to transform Simon into her fantasy image of Edward. Doesn’t she even suggest he grow a moustache or beard so he can look more like Edward? Even Miranda calls her a “hopeless romantic.”
For whom love has always been this perfect unrealized thing, free of the complications of real life, of annoying piles of laundry and dishes and kids yelling and crying . . .
I see Julia as a combination of Madame Bovary and Don Quixote. She is not nearly as annoying as Madame Bovary but is minus the charm of Don Quixote. Her cousin did her a huge favor when he punctured her fantasy and plonked her down on terra firma.
I don’t see Simon as being unrealistically romantic. I feel sorry for him. He is expected to live up to his wife’s romantic fantasy of a Prince Charming who will sweep her off her feet and carry her into the sunset to live happily ever after. No wonder he feels inadequate. No one can live up to a fantasy. He does want to try, though. He thinks of performing romantic gestures like carrying her over the threshold, buying flowers, etc. etc. but is never able to carry it off. He loves a woman who is not even present in their marriage. He wants a woman who will see him and love him for who he is, warts and all, and not some fantasy image she has conjured up.
I loved the final scene. All this time, Julia and Simon have been tiptoeing in their marriage. They even tiptoe around each other in the bathroom. But now that reality has intruded into her fantasy, she wakes up. And Simon does something for her he hasn’t done before. He plays the piano. It’s as if they connect for the first time. He plays some of the wrong notes, but she applauds him, anyway. She finally sees him. And she loves him—warts and all.
A wonderful conclusion to an amazing novel.

So, thank you, thank you, thank you. I'm still in gushing mode :)

I love your take on Julia and Simon. It is interesting how folks are seeing Julia and Simon a bit differently -- it is always fun to see how characters are differently perceived by different readers. It reminds me of how differently my husband and I give directions -- he never sees the landmarks I do and I never see those that get his attention!

Also, dreamy writing is spot on!
Also, how about the tragedy of Edward finding land and SHELTER only to die there?!



I just posted my review of the novel in case any are interested.
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
I am glad you all enjoyed the book so much - as it was a book I rated very highly before my judgment was sharpened by peer pressure here, I was a little apprehensive that it might not be as good as I remembered. Orkney is worth reading too - a mixture of Orcadian myth (one of its protagonists is obsessed by selkies) and an odd couple modern love story, but it is still probably the weakest of the three if only because this book and Painter to the King are so good.

Thanks, Hugh. I've been introduced to so many great novelists through this list. I really appreciate the group reads and discussions even though I'm not always able to participate.

We spent a good bit of time on Julia and Simon and the discussion has heightened my interest in that portion of the book. I did, however, enjoy Edward's story more. I'd love to hear more from all of you about that part of the book. Sackville did such a wonderful job of pulling me into that bitterly cold world. I think she captured Edward's dream, even the why of its importance to him. He failed to fulfil either his dream or his promise to Emily to return but I never pitied him. But Emily I pitied.

And the guy that steals all the medicine!
I don't know much about real Arctic explorers, but I imagine the fictional story isn't far off from so many real ones.





I second that, Linda. Thanks for choosing it and for a great discussion. A special big thank you for introducing me to a new favorite author :)




Thank you, I will!
I have just been reading The Ice Museum: In Search Of The Lost Land Of Thule, a wide-ranging mixture of memoir, travel writing and history, and Joanna Kavenna talks quite a lot about Nansen - I think Nansen is the primary inspiration for Edward's expedition - Nansen also left an icebound ship in an attempt to walk to the North Pole, and found his way back in much the same way, but was luckier in that he was found before he perished.
Books mentioned in this topic
Arctic Dreams (other topics)The Ice Museum: In Search Of The Lost Land Of Thule (other topics)
Orkney (other topics)
Painter to the King (other topics)
What do you think of the two storylines? Did you think they meshed well? Did you like one more than the other?