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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > 4 Chapters to M/M romance Sequel Short Story

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J.K. Jones | 4 comments Hi there,

I am seeking feedback on my short story novel. It is a sequel, but I would just like some feedback on the pacing, structure, and overall development. It is very dark, dealing with lots of angst. So please let me know if you are interested.

Best regards.


message 2: by Kerdel (new)

Kerdel Ellick | 30 comments I would not mind reading it!


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J.K. Jones | 4 comments Thank you!

You can grab it here:

https://storyoriginapp.com/reviewcopi...


message 4: by Kole (new)

Kole Linden | 2 comments Hello J.K.

If you're still looking for betas on this, I've sent a request through StoryOrigin. Always interested in m/m stories!


message 5: by Kole (new)

Kole Linden | 2 comments Hello again! I followed the link and received a copy of the first published book for review. Is there a link for the unpublished sequel for beta-ing?


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J.K. Jones | 4 comments Kole wrote: "Hello again! I followed the link and received a copy of the first published book for review. Is there a link for the unpublished sequel for beta-ing?"

Yes, the sequel is coming out soon in Nov. Did you want to be added to the ARC for this book as well?


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