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Author56 | 98 comments Hello.
I'm trying to find a couple beta readers for my novel. I'm looking for critiques concerning developmental things, especially characters, but all critiques are welcome.
Here's the description:
Detori hates the idea of marriage. She decides to do the only other option; become a priest. Even better, being a priest would mean moving to a monastery, a place where she could hide her identity as a refugee and avoid the hatred she's grown up with.
Leona would do anything to keep her friendship with Detori. Including going to the monastery with her.
But at the monastery, xenophobic priests there are plotting to destroy all of Detori's people. Including Detori. Leona receives information about their plan, and has to save her friend before it's too late.
If you're interested, please respond in the comments and we'll figure out a way to communicate.

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Author56 | 98 comments Hi Liv. Thanks for your interest! I sent you an email.

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