Nemesism - Thomas/Cecelia

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https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

I thought Cecelia wrote it

[dagger [et in arcadia ego]]

They're both co-writing it together

[[deleted user]]

We both did

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

Ahhh

[[deleted user]]

I just put it as my name cause Cecelia isn't on this group

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

the book is very petty

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

not this book, her other one.

[[deleted user]]

Which one?

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

demons in disguise

[[deleted user]]

Its not Petty!

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

it kinda is. If not petty than Mary Sue

[[deleted user]]

Whats wrong with it?

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

Everyone always believes her lies, she's always loved for her entire life. She's aa super strong demon that people have been looking for.

She's the classical rebel against the cliché evil.

it's really repetitive at the very least

[[deleted user]]

Everyone believes her cause she is a demon!

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

yeah, that just proves the boringness. I personally like an interesting story. Not a story where she just becomes a little petty mary sue.

If you don't like constructive criticism and just want people to tell you how good your book is, don't post it because that'll never happen

[[deleted user]]

Have you even read all three books?

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

I wasn't being rude. Please don't come into conversations that don't involve you!


Also Got it?!?! was rude.


Thomas: No, I gave up on it because it just wasn't my thing. I like books that bring srprise

[✝✝ Christina ✝✝✝]

I honestly would prefer it if people said negative things. It helps me get better.

Ex: When doing my kata in karate and people say it's good but it's not, that hurts me instead of helping me

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Ok, absolutely NO fighting in here, got it?

Personally, I think the book is very good. It’s well thought out and has adventure to it. Believe me, I’ve ready some pretty bad stories and this isn’t one of them.

Everyone, please don’t get so worked up about this. Constructive criticism is best. No bashing people. Honestly, it doesn’t help anyone to be rude. The best way to help others improve is to gently point out their mistakes and encourage them to improve.

If there are any more silly arguments like this, all the participants WILL be kicked out without warning, got it?

I am sick and tired of all the arguing and it certainly isn’t helping my situation at home. My mom isn't doing well and I don’t have the patience to deal with y’all. Please, please, please stop fighting. I can’t take it anymore!
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ƒɛąɾƖɛಽಽ ąחɗ ƒɛɾσͼίσնಽ [[summer-long semi-hiatus]] wrote: " Ok, absolutely NO fighting in here, got it?

Personally, I think the book is very good. It’s well thought out and has adventure to it. Believe me, I’ve ready some pretty bad stories and this isn’..."

I'm sorry. Its just, I am very tired right now. I have only slept like, ten hours in the past week.

[smile]

Thank you guys, and sorry for lashing out at y’all...