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A song I wrote about my ex

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message 1: by mjraves (last edited May 26, 2020 06:34PM) (new)

mjraves (bookscoffeeandimalesbian) | 7 comments hey guys, over the past couple of weeks I have been writing a song that is really personal to me.I like music that makes me emotional and reminds me of my personal experiences, so I wrote this song about my breakup. (I do have a pre chorus and chorus but I did not label them here)
I would really appreciate if you guys could read it (I haven’t put it to music yet, I’m working on that) and let me know your HONEST thoughts-if it is trash, please say. but I hope you do enjoy it hurts so much

it hurts so much (EXPLICIT)

I almost ended my life cause you hurt me so much
My whole body aches when I think of your touch
I hide from the world now because one person betrayed me
Bitch why’d you have to ruin everybody

I want you to come back to me
Wipe the tears off my face
(Before I drown in them)
I think you at least owe that to me
‘Cause we only went to first base

The pain is unbearable
Everything’s so terrible
It all hurts so much
Yeah it does

When I see you in the halls I don’t know what to say
Look you in the eyes real quick
Before I run the other way
I know they say karma’s a bitch
But heartbreak is the real one
I should’ve ended this before it even begun

I keep wondering, could we have lasted
If we were both in a better place
If when we were talking
I stared at your face instead of the ground

It hurts so much
It hurts so much
It hurts so much
Yeah it hurts so much
But I still want it

I guess it’s better to have
Lotta pain on my shoulders
Than have all the good memories I shared with you
Smashed and broken on boulders

I want you to come back to me
Wipe the tears off my face
(Before I drown in them)
I think you at least owe that to me
‘Cause we only went to first base

It hurts so much
It hurts so much
It hurts so much
Yeah it hurts so much
But I still want it

You broke my heart so many times
And never tried to fix it
I always told you you’d regret it
But you never listened

I just want to see you again
I wanna be more than just really good friends
Even though it hurts so much
I still wanna risk it

I set myself up to get my heart broken
Let ‘em cheat on me
Let ‘em do whatever they want
It drove me fucking crazy

I cry myself to sleep every night
Do whatever I can to make this right
(Even though it’s never gonna be right)

I cared about us more than you ever did about me
We gotta acknowledge that
It was all you who ruined this, none of it was me
Don’t deny it even though it hurts so much knowing

I wanna ask you if you really wanted
To break my heart
If that’s your life’s dream
I’m not gonna stop you
Even though it hurts so much not to

You broke my heart so many times
And never tried to fix it
I always told you you’d regret it
But you never listened

It hurts so much
It really hurts
It hurts so much
It really hurts
It hurts so much
It really hurts

You broke my heart so many times
And never tried to fix it
I always told you you’d regret it
But you never listened

I wanna ask you if you really wanted
To break my heart
If that’s your life’s dream
I’m not gonna stop you
Even though it hurts so much not to

I gotta deal with this heartbreak on my own
In this big world I’m all alone
Breaking up with your lover
Is getting praised, it’s renowned

It hurts so much
It really hurts
It hurts so much
It really hurts
It hurts so much
It really hurts
But I still want it

All this pain hurts so fucking much
But I still fucking want it


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

ahh it makes my heart hurt


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh my god. This...this makes me cry. This is exactly how I feel.


Eᐯᗩ ᑕᗩᒪOᖇE ᗷᖇEKKEᖇ | 168 comments Wow that is really good!


dagger [bing bong] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) That is amazing. If you want, I could help you set it to music?


message 6: by mjraves (new)

mjraves (bookscoffeeandimalesbian) | 7 comments thank you so much for all the nice feedback guys!! and @Potatos/Dagger and @Ava {“Underestimate me. That’ll be fun.”} that would be great, if you have any tips or ideas! I would appreciate help!


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