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message 1: by Sushie || "In writing, you must kill all your, Make sure to always write ;) (new)

Sushie || "In writing, you must kill all your darlings." -William Faulkner (73687) | 79 comments Mod
“The Act” by Trail
A poem

It’s about how my depression can and went currently.
No words in it could me considered inappropriate. ;)

8/10
Idk what genre


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Sushie || "In writing, you must kill all your darlings." -William Faulkner (73687) | 79 comments Mod
Now you can post your story below in whatever form you want, and other members can talk about your book or give you tips, etc.


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Trail | 3 comments The Act
A poem by Trail



I dreamed a dream and it woke me up
There I lay fighting my cowers
Then out of the dream
It didn’t take long just some hours
Hours, hours it didn’t take hours
Seconds, seconds it came
And I still cower


This thing came and went
This thing was not a radge
This thing was unbent
This thing made me unlatch


These final days where upon
It has still not gone
I fear it may not take off
These binding tracks it has set on


Silver  - Have a great day, you're loved Wow... your poem is super illustrative! Very well done, and I hope things go okay!


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