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May 22, 2020 12:12PM
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You guys didn't ask, and I haven't posted anything on this story yet, but I'm going to put this here anyway because you're my friends and I'm just assuming you guys want to read my writing.
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Ok! Tell us when you write it and we’ll read it as soon as we’re on!
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...I wrote the prologue
It's super short because it's a prologue and that's how I tend to write prologues .
Any advice/comments/reviews?????
Ooooooh... me likey! (I also really like the names... but I didn't think you'd want to hear that! :D)
Thank you!Sidenote - I need a better name for the "Blaze"of Blaze and Blizzard.She's this feisty redhead currently named Pheonix, but I feel likdle she needs a better name.
My only requirements are that it sounds good with the name Kayne because that's her brother's name. It doesn't even have to mean "fire".
Chapter two uploaded! Constructive criticisms please, no bashing!A few questions:
Was it too short?
Did you notice any grammar errors?
Were there parts that seemed unnecessary?
Was anything confusing?
Do you have any advice for me to edit it and make it better?
Thank you!
Universe wrote: "Chapter two uploaded! Constructive criticisms please, no bashing!A few questions:
Was it too short?
Did you notice any grammar errors?
Were there parts that seemed unnecessary?
Was anything con..."
it's great
Third chapter is uploadedgive me some reviews
XDJay, would you be mad at me if I PMed you one last spoiler?
Well, uh, please don't murder meeeeeeThe next chapter will be out next Sunday
So that's 9 days from now
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...I added a new chapterrrr and you can expect a few moreeee over the next few dayssss
