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dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) You guys didn't ask, and I haven't posted anything on this story yet, but I'm going to put this here anyway because you're my friends and I'm just assuming you guys want to read my writing.


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​ (dragomania) lemme read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!11


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smile even when you can’t (smileyfox) | 788 comments Ok! Tell us when you write it and we’ll read it as soon as we’re on!


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


I wrote the prologue



It's super short because it's a prologue and that's how I tend to write prologues .


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Any advice/comments/reviews?????


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​ (dragomania) Is good

:D


ℂhigeen( •_•) Ooooooh... me likey! (I also really like the names... but I didn't think you'd want to hear that! :D)


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Thank you!


Sidenote - I need a better name for the "Blaze"of Blaze and Blizzard.She's this feisty redhead currently named Pheonix, but I feel likdle she needs a better name.


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​ (dragomania) What type of names are okay?
(view spoiler)


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) My only requirements are that it sounds good with the name Kayne because that's her brother's name. It doesn't even have to mean "fire".


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​ (dragomania) well Keahi might work


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Chapter two uploaded! Constructive criticisms please, no bashing!


A few questions:

Was it too short?
Did you notice any grammar errors?
Were there parts that seemed unnecessary?
Was anything confusing?
Do you have any advice for me to edit it and make it better?

Thank you!


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​ (dragomania) Universe wrote: "Chapter two uploaded! Constructive criticisms please, no bashing!


A few questions:

Was it too short?
Did you notice any grammar errors?
Were there parts that seemed unnecessary?
Was anything con..."


it's great


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Third chapter is uploaded



give me some reviews


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) XD


Jay, would you be mad at me if I PMed you one last spoiler?


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​ (dragomania) no fair


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Well, uh, please don't murder meeeeee


The next chapter will be out next Sunday


So that's 9 days from now


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​ (dragomania) murder


dagger [et in arcadia ego] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...


I added a new chapterrrr and you can expect a few moreeee over the next few dayssss


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