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message 1: by Aviv (new)

Aviv Shener (ashener) | 19 comments Hi guys.
I'm looking for a fresh set of eyes to have a look at the beginning of my book.
Here is the blurb:

What would you do to protect your sanity?

Matt Evens was enjoying college life when his father unexpectedly died. Consumed by guilt for ignoring the warning signs, Matt tries to save the family business by taking out a risky loan. When the deal falls through, Matt is offered a way out; help a scientist with his secret projects and don’t ask any questions.

As Matt spends time in Albert’s lab, he discovers how unorthodox the scientist methods truly are. Trying to reason his way out of the deal results in a crooked cop being hired to keep an eye on things, in any way possible. To save himself and protect his loved ones, Matt will find himself pushed onto a dark path of vengeance that will forever alter his life.


If you're interested, you can write me here or send me an email:

Thank you.

message 2: by Diana (new)

Diana Hockley (cadfael) | 65 comments I can do that for you, Matt. Send it to:
Make sure you send it in Word.

message 3: by Aviv (new)

Aviv Shener (ashener) | 19 comments Diana wrote: "I can do that for you, Matt. Send it to:
Make sure you send it in Word."

Thank you!
I sent them.


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