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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Opening chapter of a young adult coming-of-age story

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message 1: by Tom (new)

Tom Adamson | 10 comments The first chapter of "An Obscure Desire of Love" is in strong need of feedback.

If you enjoy reading Young Adult novels written in the form of letters that is...

⦁ set in rural Scotland
⦁ written through the eyes of an introverted teenager
⦁ involves an unexpected and secret love story
⦁ has themes of self-discovery and complex relationships
⦁ and more...

... then I'd love to send you the first chapter (2500 words) for your feedback


message 2: by Cait (new)

Cait CO | 7 comments Hi Tom,

I have read only one book in form of letters and I actually really enjoyed it. I would be happy to read the first chapter.


message 3: by Tom (new)

Tom Adamson | 10 comments Hi Cait. Thank you so much for agreeing to read it.

What's your email so I can send it over?


message 4: by John (new)

John | 9 comments Hi Tom. Sounds very intriguing. I’ve been reading a lot of UK authors lately and love the rural settings particularly. I’d love to give it a go.

John


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