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ꌚꁒꂑ꒒ꏹ | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?

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Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) notes:

wait, Jonah and Felicity now?

kay, let me just say, I forgot what everyone looked like, I only know realized that Felicity has red hair because it finally mentioned that. I need character descriptions to constantly be woven into the story to be able to remember what people look like! XD

That's pretty much it!

ꌚꁒꂑ꒒ꏹ | 129 comments Cool! Yeah, I have no idea what they look like either! XD

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