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message 1: by S M I T E (new)

S M I T E | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?


message 2: by Aҽɾιαʅ (new)

Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) notes:

Lizzie's re-explaining her story about Sam, we don't need to hear it again.

They look at the stars, bu then comment about how they need to get back before it gets darker. I don't quite understand

the transition to and out of the vision was a bit confusing

it's even more confusing when she's explaining the vision

If she can recognize herself in her vision, why can't she recognize anyone else, especially Sam?

Wait, I don't remember anything about colored crystals in her vision, this chapter as just altogether very confusing.


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