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message 1: by :D (new)

:D (smileyfox) | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?


message 2: by Aҽɾιαʅ (new)

Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) Just gonna jump right into it:
The first paragraph is very weird to read, and again with the character description.

This chapter was also really rushed


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