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Sᴍɪʟᴇʏ Fοⅹ | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?

Sᴍɪʟᴇʏ Fοⅹ | 129 comments Oof. You’re right. Uh... I’ll tell her to fix that. Thanks!

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Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) okee dokee:

I don't understand why it's in Kenneth's perspective. Just like the last chapter, this is a big opportunity to show us inside his mind. The whole thing with him killing Iris's whole family still really bothers me. How does that make him feel, does he feel guilty and full of regret every time he looks at Iris? Come on, stuff like that changes people, how can they all just shrug it off?

Also, SERIOUSLY BAD TIMING DUDE! Nigel can wait, Lizzie needs the potion ASAP!!! WHAT THE HECK!!!

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