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message 1: by S M I T E (new)

S M I T E | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?


message 2: by Aҽɾιαʅ (new)

Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) notes:

again with the short chapters, just combine them with other chapters, don't give them a whole chapter for themselves.

This chapter is a big opportunity to let us see into the minds of the villians, and it's been wasted. What are the motives, the story behind it all, what makes him think that powers are a good idea, what is his goal? I need to know.


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