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message 1: by S M I T E (new)

S M I T E | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?


message 2: by Aҽɾιαʅ (last edited May 14, 2020 08:05PM) (new)

Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) last one for today:

I don't know about Iris, but I would feel like upright murdering Kenneth, no joke.

Come on, this is the first time seeing the world in Annecke's perspective. I need PERSONALITY!!!!! how does she freakin' see the world!!!

Also, I thought Iris went to bed with the letter, bu the chapter has Kenneth looking at it...?

Again with the short chapters, either lengthen it or connect it to another chapter.


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